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Fourth of July
by Douglas W Bentley
Wednesday, June 24, 2009
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***Picture from government archives***


The old drummer

That determined stare

That death march glare

Leads them in step

Tears long dried and weep

Keeping the battle beat

The same repeat

You can see it in his eyes

Never retreat. . . .never retreat

Even if I die.

 

The fifer bleeding

And bandaged

Yet his steps match too

The young drummer boy dressed in blue

His eyes fixed on the old soldier

Both with their drums slung over their shoulder

Knows they’re out in the open exposed-can’t get any colder

Their not about to go run and hide

Not afraid to die with each other by their side.

                                                                       

Forward - marching soldiers

Their comrades may not see them

But they sure can hear them

The enemy ahead

Muskets aimed

Yet their victory song they proclaim

God ordained

Keeping the battle beat

The same repeat

You can see it in their eyes

Never retreat. . . .never retreat

Only United --  can victory be reached

 

The flag follows

Old Glory with her 13 stars and stripes

Torn and tattered as is her army

Yet with hats raised high

The world would take notice and look

Their freedom fought for and won - Liberty never forsook.

 

DWB ©2009

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/27/2009
This is superbly written. I especially loved the second to the last stanza and the lines
"Yet their victory song they proclaim
God ordained"
Leaving their strong belief of God out of this poem would have lessened its impact, at least to me...because it would have taken their heart out of it.
I will long remember this stirring poem and will not look at our Independence Day in the same way because of it. Thank you.
Cryssa
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/25/2009
This deserves an award, Douglas! Spendid writing!
Happy Fourth to you!;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/24/2009
You capture the moment well and bring the spirit forward. Happy Fourth, now and forever....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford 6/24/2009
Excellent write poet. You captured the true essence of that history changing time. I applaud you.
Marcia Miller-Twiford


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