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Half Undone By The Wind
by Douglas W Bentley
Saturday, June 27, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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She awaits patiently

Sitting under her spacious canopy

Stares off silently

To the lighthouse in the distance

The white picket fence

The rocks on the bluff

She wears a white blouse with a blue collar and cuff. . . . .

 

That becomes. . . . .half undone.

 

Stars twinkle in her eyes

Momentarily distracted

Watches how a sea gull flies

The shore crabs reacted

A wave on the shore breaks

A deep longing breath she takes

She wears a white blouse with a blue collar and cuff. . . . .

 

That becomes. . . . .half undone.

 

She sights a ship coming shore

Sees it’s flag

Runs the more

Her long hair flows

Off her hat flies

Wide her joyous eyes

Doesn’t stop

Till she reaches the dock.

 

She opens the gate at the white picket fence

The ship still in the distance

And as this dream comes to an end

That white blouse floats away into the wind.

 

DWB ©2009

 

 




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Reviewed by Michelle Mead 8/5/2009
wow wow wow-i think this might be your best. love that title.
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/30/2009
Your palpable imagery makes this write seem as if it's personal. The love you have for your craft, Doug, permeates this. You are growing.
Blessings ...
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 6/30/2009
Great poem,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/30/2009
LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/28/2009
Kind of haunting with the repeated refrain that enhances the poem !
I really enjoyed this one Douglas, it's different!

ps thanks for the scripture on my "Arrogance" post;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/27/2009
Love the somewhat choppy yet rhythm of the short lines followed by the long repeating line...it brought the images of the ocean shoreline more sharply into view.

Cryssa
Reviewed by Reginald Johnson 6/27/2009
Exceptionally well done.

Regards ...

Reginald V. Johnson



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