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From a Mess To my Best
by Douglas W Bentley
Tuesday, July 07, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Her words were like honey on a fingertip

She painted them on walls just to watch them drip

Down the halls beneath the waterfalls is where they would slip

Then sailors would spread them from ship to ship.

 

I would recite her words but no land-lover stopped and heard

They floated to the sky and were eaten by birds

Taken to their nests where they would finally find rest

I tried my best but what I did would just turn into a mess.

 

Come sail with me

Behold secrets from the seas

You won’t be able to touch me

But there I’ll be

 

Wandering. . . . . .

 

Her beauty was in her eyes

She could see my soul

Blue to green

Green to blue

Hip to hip.

 

Come walk with me

Hold my hand

So if you should slip

I could carry back to my ship.

 

My words she couldn’t understand

Too much of the old man

Embellished in my bones

Yet, I couldn’t leave her alone.

 

Night after night

I drove her insane

Still, she remained

And I, the same.

 

Her body like honey to an old bear

Sometimes, I couldn’t help but stare

Her beauty like a sunset that wouldn’t turn dark

Spreading bread crumbs to swans in the park

Taken to their nests where they would finally find rest

One of these days, she’ll see my best.

 

DWB ©2009

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Michelle Mead 8/5/2009
Another great one with another great ending- and an add to the library :)
Reviewed by jude forese 7/10/2009
deeply moving and well written ...
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace 7/9/2009
Excellent witing sweet man...Hugssss
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 7/9/2009
This is a well written and great poem,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/8/2009
From the imagery of the first line on, a compelling invention.
"One of these days, she’ll see my best." Your final line leaves your thoughts on a hopeful note. Sometimes, though, the best in a person is never seen by the other unless it shines in a way the other can relate to.
Remembering an old quote:
"To thy own self be true"
When we stand before the Bema judgement seat and give an account it will be our life that will be audited, not anyone elses. Again, I reiterate Doug, you just keep getting better. Whatever is happening in your life has become a powerful muse.
Blessings brother ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/7/2009
Very moving and compelling, Douglas. I can relate. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/7/2009
Your intent to impress her is so deeply felt, she must be
very special...excellent poem, Douglas...ET
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 7/7/2009
Oh Douglas, how heartfelt...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 7/7/2009
IF SHE'S STILL STAYING AROUND...MAYBE SHE ALREADY HAS. GREAT PHRASES, VIVID IMAGERY AND GOOD RHYME SCHEME. ENJOYED. THAKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE.


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