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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
10/15/2009 |
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| Oh this is so charmingly written. The image that comes to mind is of one of those cute Mabel Lucy Atwell children with their hand outstretched. Only a very churlish Santa could resist this honest and trusting plea...and Santa is never churlish..is he?? Love and Hugs, Diana |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/16/2008 |
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Great, Liz. This is so cute. You capture the fact that we're all human and we make mistakes. I bet that palm is full when you pull it back to your waist! Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jayne Waggoner (Reader) |
12/11/2008 |
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| How interesting! A poem in which someone admits faults and accepts disappointment. A poem rich in honesty. You've captured humanity in a well written verse. Much enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
12/11/2008 |
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| Suffer the little ones to come unto me, said Jesus and he didn't mind if the were naughty or nice, at least nothing has been printed to that effect. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/10/2008 |
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I interpret this on a "broader" scale, Liz. Thank you for provoking my thoughts. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/9/2008 |
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How could Santa resist such honesty and downright humility, making of him no demands whatsoever, just living with faith and trust in his goodwill?
I bet this letter goes straight to the top of the pile! Hope your chimney's a big one, Liz! :)) This gets 10 out of 10 from me... especially as I can relate to it a good deal. High five to you, Lady. xx |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
12/9/2008 |
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The line that sticks out to me is "distracted by pettiness"... Made me stop and think about how easy it is to do...
Thanks for the thought provoking write.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
12/8/2008 |
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Hello Liz,
Well-done!! So finely said and penned!!
Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/8/2008 |
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Oh, this is powerfully penned, Elizabeth. I seriously doubt he'll pass you by, not with the honesty in these lines. Well done, and Merry Christmas.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
12/8/2008 |
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Santa has a big heart....you will just have to wait and see... but I am guessing he fills every one's dream.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/8/2008 |
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| I hope Santa forgives us all! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/8/2008 |
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Well the first step to redemtion and receiving mercy is accepting that you have been bad or naughty so I think as Santa Fee I would forgive with the promise to try and do better in the New Year.
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/7/2008 |
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Santa will understand. I am sure you'll get something; I know I hope I do! LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, and Merry Christmas to you!
As always, your friend, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/7/2008 |
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I'm sure Santa won't let you go empty handed!;-)
Eileen
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