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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/18/2009 |
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Maybe sometimes it appears that there is no pause for anything... but to those who witness a birth, life pauses for a moment while we gaze at that little piece of heaven. Likewise...when a loved one dies...maybe the world doesn't pause, but I know that my heart skips a beat now and then as I pause...and remember...them.
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
2/18/2009 |
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| Very good perspective, Liz. I had the same thing pointed out to me this week at the funeral service of my step-mother, that with her 18th, 19th and 20th great grandchildren born this month, it might have seemed like time for her generation to flow on out of the world.....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/16/2009 |
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Interesting philosophical perspective, Liz. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
2/15/2009 |
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| yes we must go on, nice analogy and rant Liz |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
2/14/2009 |
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Liz,
It's sad to think of life going on without us, but it's true. The next generation takes over. In fact, I've noticed many elderly folk allow the younger generation full reign while they're still alive. A poem that makes me think. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
2/14/2009 |
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Liz~!
You exceed so well with these writes - perfection here!!
Happy Valentine's Day,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/13/2009 |
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Yes but the power to stop and smell the roses can slow down that steamroller we know as life if we take the option to try.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/13/2009 |
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Elizabeth,
In eight great lines you speak hundreds, certainly more than 'just some thoughts'. I enjoy the depth here.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
2/13/2009 |
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| Great poem, Elizabeth. We'd love for time to pause, wouldn't we, but as you've said, it doesn't. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/13/2009 |
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Powerful writing, Elizabeth; very well written!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
2/13/2009 |
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| POWERFUL WRITE although short, it said it all...love and hugs, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/13/2009 |
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Thought provoking excellence, Elizabeth, well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
2/13/2009 |
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| Life is this moment and the next... Wonderful push for the frightened, still living yesterday. Thank you for sharing. Warmth and Love, Carin |
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