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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
5/14/2009 |
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| Very nice! |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/25/2009 |
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Spot ON, Elizabeth!! Spot ON!! You have captured the experience
perfectly. The sound and fury, the power, the eery curtain of darkness. . .excuse me, I've got to go get under the bed now.
Feel a storm comin'~!! xOx 'Pea' xOx |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/24/2009 |
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I see this poem with double meanings...both ominous in their own way, yet storms bring rebirth as well...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
3/20/2009 |
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| This piece can be read simply, Liz, or be felt more deeply for its use of metaphor ... either way, it is a wonderful, descriptive write. Well done! Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
3/19/2009 |
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| There's a lot of punch in this menace you describe, Liz--one of those rare poems that says a lot in only a few words--reminds me of the brevity of my own poem, Sister Silence, although this one is a descriptive enjoyment, too....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
3/17/2009 |
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| Marvelous work. enjoyed this very much |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
3/15/2009 |
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A well written piece,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
3/14/2009 |
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Wow, Liz. You breathe life into this title. Fantastic descriptions! Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/14/2009 |
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Elizabeth,
Strongly expressed dark and foreboding metaphor current and apt (unfortunately) for these times. Well said!
John |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
3/13/2009 |
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| Oh my ,I love how you wrote this..well done sweet lady..stay safe and well....Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/13/2009 |
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I like the way you spin weather into life and life into what the universe decrees it to be...
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/13/2009 |
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You capture Storm, well, Elizabeth - natural and manmade. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
3/13/2009 |
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| Very powerful storm and write Elizabeth...One you must have experienced for it seemed so real with the power of your pen...love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/13/2009 |
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What storm?? LOL It's been raining here in Burleson, Texas, for two days; we need it, but still--I'm more than ready for some sunshine! Well done, Elizabeth; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
3/13/2009 |
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Elizabeth,
A very picturesque and meaningful write. "Chaos escapes order Another assualt beginning, another blunder into the macabre.
Fabulous.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/13/2009 |
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Dark but most apt and timely considering the "state of affairs" in our world. Thank you, Liz. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
3/13/2009 |
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| Omen, indeed! Because it's been raining to 2 days here in Dallas! You described the impending strom veru elegantly. |
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