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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/21/2009 |
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| These are quite some statements, "life spinning in hysterical relief," with lots of meanings both obvious and implicit, well-done description and insight. Hang in there, Liz..........Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
5/14/2009 |
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| God bless you, also! A lovely write. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
4/17/2009 |
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Excellent writing sweet lady..sure have missed reading you..I have been so busy with work and illness no time for me these days..stay safe and well...keep smiling OK...Hugsss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/5/2009 |
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A very deep message here, Liz. I'm taken by the weight of the responsibility in the last few lines. Those words remind me of moments in my life when I felt in over my head. Like getting married, buying a house, being in debt.... Since I'm not a mother, I haven't had the awesome responsibility for another human being, other than being there for my hubby. A fascinating poem here.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/28/2009 |
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I love the way you allow us to see what you see and in so few words you tell your message.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/27/2009 |
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There is much depth of meaning behind these verses, Elizabeth. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/27/2009 |
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Elizabeth,
This made me sit up, good poetry does that. Here there's power and depth and Axilea is right, "The norm before the storm" is very meaningful. This is fine writing indeed.
John |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
3/27/2009 |
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| Incredibly powerful. Thank you, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/27/2009 |
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The many questions and doubts about life itself, brought out so elogantly through your words...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/27/2009 |
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This is a powerfully written poem. I loved the last three lines.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/27/2009 |
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And I, left questioning,
My ability to see you through.
Quite powerful, and quite sad, Elizabeth. |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
3/26/2009 |
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| Sounds like a future of suicide by cop. Just be careful you're not standing in between phases. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
3/26/2009 |
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An intriguing piece, Elizabeth.
I particularly love the line
"The norm before the storm";
it is very meaningful.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
3/26/2009 |
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| Oh, wow, Elizabeth. Very, very stirring. Your last line packs quite a punch. |
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