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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/27/2009 |
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Liz,
It does seem like life throws curve ball after curve ball. Harder for some than others. Stay strong. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/22/2009 |
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I appreciate your candidness and your strength. I thank you for helping us to be aware of what you struggle with...to help us understand the fight that many deal with on a daily basis.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/22/2009 |
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Sad,but express beautifully.I hope you are doing alright.take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
5/21/2009 |
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Heartrending poem, Liz.
Please take care of you. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/21/2009 |
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| That is a great description of the frustration of pain and confusion when it seems impossible to do anything about them. Well written, Liz. Unfortunately, the best way to know how to write about such events is to live through them. I echo John that you show great strength, but please take time to care for yourself. Remember the admonitions, "Be still and know that I am God," and "Hand your troubles to God for Him to work out." Easier said then done, but search for the faith, and you will find it....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
5/20/2009 |
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| Fastastic! Well written! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/20/2009 |
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Sad poem , but beautifully written
to emphasize the feelings!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
5/20/2009 |
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| Liz, the pain is palpable. Terrible to suffer in silence, in hiding. I hope you receive relief soon, and also understanding. Blessings and hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/20/2009 |
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Liz, life can sure be bubbling over with so much struggles these days,, and indeed,,,may the rain wash away the strain! Moving write
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
5/20/2009 |
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Oh my,please stay strong sweet lady..my prayers are always with you..Hugss
Love Always sweet friend,
Chanti Lace |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/19/2009 |
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Elizabeth,
The honesty and directness of telling are unimaginably powerful here, and nothing is denied or pushed under. You show great strength in this fine poem.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/19/2009 |
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How sad, so full of anxiety and pain and sometimes it never seems to end. I pray you will be well....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/19/2009 |
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Liz,
Healing in these lines for those who suffer from mental illness and can write about it as powerfully as you do - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
5/19/2009 |
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Quill therapy with really timed and rhymed song lyrics, Liz...acoustic guitar and chromium strings could pluck this out...the best songs are written from real incidents in life...Remember, Roy Orbison did Crying...be well.
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
5/19/2009 |
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Hi Elizabeth, this piece for so many has a familiar ring to it. Have to hang on... stay strong, and thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/19/2009 |
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I can certainly empathize with this for lately I seem to be bombarded by one problem after another...just have to hang on thought and hope for the world to eventually slow down and let us off.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/19/2009 |
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Raw, honest, and very real; I find your verses most compelling, Liz. I send you love and my very best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
5/19/2009 |
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"Left with frustrations and crying" tears give relief -and crying is an outlet. Good poems about crying are rare, like this one.
Cynthia |
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