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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
9/13/2009 |
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Painful and short... where it ends, hope begins.
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| Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader) |
7/19/2009 |
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| Seems to me a honest write. Be well always. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Kopp |
7/18/2009 |
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Elizabeth, a powerful poem. I am also bipolar. It prevents me from writing often times. I also believe strongly in God, though I don't always pray enough. Congratulations on your new granddaughter. I realize you probably can't answer my messages while you're on sabbatical with the little one. I have a four-year-old granddaughter named Mia. My relationship with her is compromised by the bi-polar.
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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
7/16/2009 |
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| You've used contrasts very well in this poem of spiritual struggle. Liked your phrase "life against the pull". Other's words can sometimes be the family we need. Especially God's Book |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
7/4/2009 |
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| Inspiring. A beautiful write. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/1/2009 |
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| I feel your pain, but the poem is wonderfully succinct. Holding a book for warmth i n s p i r e d. Here's to better tomorrows!! Love you, Pea |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/30/2009 |
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betrayal is a harsh reality to impact our soul with darkness...
Be Blessed Den Sister
Much Love & Visions Clarity
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
6/18/2009 |
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| Very inspiring! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/16/2009 |
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Extremely powerful, Liz! Emotion in every line. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
6/14/2009 |
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| Excellent work Liz, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
6/8/2009 |
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| Simple eloquence rewarded in faith. Great and enduring type writing, Liz......Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/5/2009 |
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Great poem,excellent work,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/3/2009 |
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| Excellent writing sweet lady..enjoyed very much...keep smiling always OK..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/2/2009 |
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Liz, this is powerful and very moving! I'm glad you felt
the presence of the one who truly cares...Excellent poem!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/2/2009 |
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May you be lifted from such a force...heartfelt poem!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/2/2009 |
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| Quite powerful and heartfelt, Elizabeth. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/1/2009 |
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Painful but powerfully honest with a hint of hope in the second to last verse. Love, peace, and healing to you, Liz.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/1/2009 |
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Much pain and undeserved agaony in this piece. I pray all is okay with you....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/1/2009 |
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The struggle to just give up sometimes can be so overwhelming, I know I have been trying to cope with that struggle for a long time too Liz. Hope your burdensand mine lighten up as the year moves on.
hugs
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/1/2009 |
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Elizabeth,
Pithy, poignant and beautifully said.
John |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/1/2009 |
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| Lovely sentiments.... |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/1/2009 |
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Life imitates art, doesn't it, Liz? Being one who knows what's going on in your personal life of family dynamics, Baldacci's characters Sean King and Michelle Maxwell adds some realism in First Family, the newly released thriller. Keep reaching Liz, those children come first...Blessed Be.
Love,
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/1/2009 |
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So short and simple, but it says everything...I especially love that second to the last line.
Cryssa |
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