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The Early Hours
by Brandon Gene Petit
Saturday, August 12, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Dawn unfolds on a town's older region
Sunrise crawls across cobblestone streets
Autumn break speaks its opening words
An urban dream world prepares to awake
 
I walk these archaic avenues alone
Following the lead of my oversized shadow
Astringent cold awakens my face
While a glinting sun slowly heats my back
 
Past gothic fencing and cream-colored brick
Concrete bridges veined with vines
Damp shades of wood stare from the park
A fountain shines at the heart of the square
 
The muffled click of claws against curb
From blackbirds prodding the lower scenery
Shares the air with benevolent fumes
Of bakery bread and chimney smoke
 
Porch lights fading in soft succession
The radius of light extends its reach
Reflections expanding in dark shop windows
The first opened door soon taints the silence
 
In time the usual routines exude
An old piece of map slowly stirs to life
Another new chapter from torn, yellowed pages
Is resurrected into tangible shapes
 
 

 


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Reviewed by Dawn Wilson 6/12/2008
The imagery in this is stunning. You paint a picture with your words that puts the reader there. Beautiful work.
Reviewed by Sandra Ferrara Gentry 8/19/2007
one's senses come alive in this one!
great write!
Sandra
Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) 1/13/2007
I guess I was looking forward to a sense of 'why.' Call me quirky. I think you have a great start to an epic poem - keep going!
Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion 9/5/2006
By Jove..this is brilliant work..indeed a genuine poet..which is more than I can say for myself..
OK..I'm tracking you now..LOL!
Bravo!!


vesna:)
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 8/13/2006
Terrific images in this, Brandon. Good work.

Tami


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