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Evening Eyes
by Brandon Gene Petit
Saturday, August 12, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Trembling tip of candle flame, reflecting in the windowpane
Does its hypnotizing dance inside a dark, cerulean frame
Staring through it grips me so, in darkness of the dining room
The evening prematurely dim; so sleek in its seducing gloom
 
 Center of this empty house, a fireplace that chirps and cracks
Deep inside my humble shrine of burning wood and bleeding wax
Silence plays a violin to hypnotize my mental foes
Winds outside will soon join in and calcify my cares and woes
 
A sleeping cat, an empty plate, before me in this hour of late
My consciousness has done its deed, now slowly starts to dissipate
 My eyes will soon play tricks on me, new phantoms in the darkness form
Fuzzy black amoebic shapes contorting here within the dorm
 
The time has come to draw the shades and put away the world outside
Midnight has a bed that’s made, prepared to rest my meeker side
Now it’s time to put to rest my nervous fears of destiny
I close my eyes and visualize as though my home were by the sea
 
 

 


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Reviewed by Joanna Leone 7/7/2008
Beautiful poem! I can envision the candle on the window pane, the sleeping cat, and the empty plate. I can see the darkness entering your house. I love the detail in this poem!
Reviewed by Richard Odilu 9/12/2007
This poem catapults me back to memory lane when I had just heard of a mysterious tale and I find myself all alone in the dark (in a country where power failure is equal to drinking water) and then fear of the dark surmounts itself in my subconcious.
I like this poem and your ability to conjure up imageries. You are excellent. Keep it up!
Reviewed by Sandra Ferrara Gentry 8/19/2007
Candle's flames do have a hypnotizing quality. Watching the dancing shadows, aids one to transcend the moment...
Sandra
Reviewed by Teresa Kitchens-Dunn 7/27/2007
You are very talented. I enjoy your artistry.

Teresa
Reviewed by Rose Loya 2/26/2007
You poem is like a painting, made me like I was there.

Rose
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/15/2006
vibrant images in this word painting beautifully written!
Much enjoyed!

Eileen
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine 8/13/2006
Easy to relate to with good use of vivid imagery. Welcome to AD. R
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 8/13/2006
Very nice work, Brandon.

Welcome to AuthorsDen!
Tami
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/13/2006
Don't exactly understand that last line, but I did the rest of the poem and I liked it. You have a Poeish lean.


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