MY OLD TEDDY BEAR
by Del E. Senkbeil
Sunday, June 01, 2003
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I was cleaning the attic the other day,
And much to my surprise!
I found my old brown teddy bear
With the big, dark beady eyes.
You won this for me at a carnival,
Some years before we were wed.
Before I had you, my teddy bear,
Would cuddle with me in my bed.
How I loved this cuddly teddy bear!
I'd make believe he was you.
I'd whisper sweet nothings in his ear,
And make him kiss me too.
After you and I tied the knot,
I no longer needed my teddy bear.
I packed him away with many things
And thru the years had forgotten where.
So happy to have found my teddy bear,
Who still looks as good as new.
So now when our new baby comes along,
Baby will be able to cuddle it too.
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/2/2003 |
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| (((del))) fictional bear or not...i love this write! my mom collected bears before she died...she amassed over 800...we donated them to the fire and police departments, pediatrics ward at the local hospital, to the nursing homes in town...what would we do with over 800 bears?? thanks for the memory jog...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/2/2003 |
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| adorable write, del; enjoyed emmensely! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/2/2003 |
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| Cute one. |
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| Reviewed by kay p m-devenish |
6/2/2003 |
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Brought back memories of my teddy,this poem made me feel really happy.
Beaut work! |
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| Reviewed by Del Senkbeil |
6/1/2003 |
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| No, Dreamweaver.. My first date moved out of town.. Have no idea what happened to him.. This is just another one of my fictional poems.. Thanx for the comments... Luv, Del |
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| Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) |
6/1/2003 |
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| Ahh what a wonderful addition to the First Date poem.. Is this the same teddy bear you told about in that poem?? (smile) |
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