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| Reviewed by Accoustic Blanket |
8/21/2008 |
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Reminded me of a funeral I conducted where I had to slow the pallbearers down to a halt just short of the hall entrance. I adjudged that the mourners had still to gather their thoughts and composed themselves in readiness to stand. At another funeral I took the steward did not even take the time to shake my hand. 'You've only got eighteen minutes at most to start and finish the service,' he brusquely stated. Not only this, he practically ordered the mourners to leave the forecourt after the service in order for the next funeral to move forward. Lightening Funeral Services is an apt title for some companies.
Regards
David |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
8/16/2008 |
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An interesting poem and I wonder why he was drivng so fast. This would be a great starter for one of those stories that people add their thoughts to. I bet they could think up dozens of reasons why they think a black hearse was zipping down the road like a bullet.
I like the way you turn a simple experience into poetry. Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
6/26/2008 |
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Funny...Maybe they were in a hurry to get their passenger in the ground.
~W~ |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
6/24/2008 |
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| I love seeing life through your poet's eyes, they find subject matter everywhere and the result is a great poem to share! HUGS SC |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/17/2008 |
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| Enjoyed this hersey write!...M |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/14/2008 |
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| Thanks for the drive down hearse lane! Love to read real life experiences put to pen. Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/13/2008 |
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| enjoyed your sense of projective humor ... |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/13/2008 |
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hee, hee... Definitely makes you wonder! I wonder...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
6/11/2008 |
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| lol. Now wait a minute. You mean you didn't find out from the gossip what was going down. OH oh, I've shown my not so nice side of liking gossip. lol. Great write. Had me going. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/10/2008 |
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Wow a write filled with mystery and excitement!
Your words took me in that drive with you
I do hope nothing happened!
Awesome Write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Stat |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/10/2008 |
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| This was full of energy, mystery, and images, leaving me wondering too. One thing for sure, if they don't slow down they'll be the one riding in a coffin in the hearse. A nice write. |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
6/10/2008 |
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| We should all be more careful my friend, Holly |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
6/9/2008 |
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...wonderful write and thoughts Joyce...
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/9/2008 |
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Good one Joyce and so vivid I could see and hear it speeding by.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/9/2008 |
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| good one...nice irony |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/9/2008 |
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A fun poem to showcase your sense of humor, Joyce! Well done~
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/9/2008 |
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| hahaha, you got him pegged,no need for such speed!;-) good one Joyce!...ET |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/9/2008 |
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Another great write you share with us Joyce. thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/9/2008 |
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Hmmm...thought provoking. Yes. Indeed!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/9/2008 |
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Spot on excellence, Joyce - well done -
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/9/2008 |
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| Most thought provoking, Joyce! |
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| Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri |
6/9/2008 |
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Joyce you are right we have all seen something like this.it brought back my own memory,
thank you
tuchy |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
6/9/2008 |
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| What was their destination indeed! Cute, well done write Joyce. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/9/2008 |
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This is very good,I like it very much
Edwin |
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