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Withers the light.....
by Karen Palumbo

Friday, June 18, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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           Withers the light.....


Strolling quietly at the waters edge,
one star, two stars, three stars shine bright.
Orange, yellow glow fills the horizon,
until darkness slowly withers the light.

Birds in the distance weaving in and out,
of the pastel lines etched in the boroughs.
Flirting between two different worlds,
dreaming of the yesterdays and all tomorrows.

Strange eerie sounds begin to surround,
as coastline converts to a different place.
Tiny fiddler crabs gently scoot across,
identifying what was, as if to retrace.

Moonlight scattered across the waves,
riding into shore on angel wings.
As if Pegasus was leading the charge,
wanting to show them shiny new things.

Dolphins, pelicans, seagulls gone home,
ocean creeps up, then washes away.
Leaving a void in the center of it all,
cleansing, erasing everything in its way.

Lonely moan is heard in the distance,
from one lighthouse forever smitten.
Stories it could tell, if it could speak,
of long ago young couples love bitten.

She in long gown, parasol in hand,
warm tears streaming down her face.
He in uniform, shiny buttons and cap,
reassuring words in style and grace.

He must leave while she remains behind,
in a pocket watch her photo close at heart.
She will keep vigil on this sandy shore,
both staring at the stars never to part.

Once dry sand is cold and wet,
as memories linger in darkness of night.
Wondering what the morning will bring,
when darkness leaves and sky turns bright.

 

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
6/18/2010 © All rights reserved 

 

 

Karen Palumbo

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Reviewed by The Poetess 8/20/2010
SO wonderfully heart touching that it brought me there
To feel sand on my feet and a salty breeze comb my hair.
;-)
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 7/5/2010
A beautiful Photo . I love the shades of the sea and sky line...The poem has wonderful visual images. It's filled with nostaliga and a winsomeness.........M
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) 6/30/2010
I am both happy to read this and to know you had the moments to create this from. This one is very vivid and soft in the mind, as read. I was feeling myself there the whole time--thanks for a divine ride, Karen.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/29/2010
A most engaging creative offering, Karen. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/27/2010
Haunting, Karen. Beautifully written. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 6/26/2010
Such a lovely work.
Reviewed by Inspire Hope 6/25/2010
Beautiful! Beautiful "Withers the light" so comforting and serene,
"When darkness leaves and sky turns bright." What excellent poetry
Karen, and hats off to Robert for this outstanding picture! Thank
you both. May the Lord bless you with His presence and His peace!
Please give those adorable two hugs for me!!!!

Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 6/21/2010
Peaceful. . . .
and Beautiful
Anticipation of sunrise
Warms the soul
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 6/21/2010
YOUR PHRASES, RHYME AND RHYTHM PRODUCE SUCH A VIVID IMAGERY OF ONE STUNNING SCENE, AS...WITHERS THE LIGHT. A MOST IMPRESSIVE OFFERING... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Connie Faust 6/20/2010
This is so smooth-flowing and lovely. I'm far from the ocean, and your picturesque descriptions of falling night made me feel the beauty of its transformation.
Connie
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/20/2010
Waves should coming with whispers from afar, it would be but the picture perfect for a perfect poem...

Georg

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 6/20/2010
Another wonderful piece of poetry. Hugs, J'nia
Reviewed by jude forese 6/20/2010
a poem beautiful and alluring ... a natural spark of being ...
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/19/2010
And we pray that he comes home. Patrick
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/19/2010
Calmly and warmly expressed, Karen; your sensitivity shines here and your understanding of 'the bigger picture' comes through very well. Fine work.

John
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/19/2010
A beautiful write Karen and I love the picture.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/19/2010
This is stellar Karen poetry!!! I especially thought the ending stanza finishes this poem off perfectly!!! Lovely work my dear friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Richard King 6/19/2010
Masterfully said. You've either been there or have a fantastic imagination. Either way, you took me there. Thanks Dick
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 6/19/2010
Wonderfully written piece, Karen.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Karen Nivens 6/19/2010
That's beautiful. I feel like I'm relaxing on a quiet beach at the base of a lighthouse wondering about all the lives that have past by and depended on its grace. You should send this to one of the many foundations trying to preserve lighthouses.
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 6/19/2010
All heart and soul bared in love, and the throbbing feelings of your elegant words. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 6/19/2010
A sweepingly romantic poem. You bring a pointillist sensibility to the picture you've drawn. I can hear Edward Mulhare reading this.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/19/2010
Karen, this is absolutely beautiful.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/19/2010
This is absolutely beautiful Karen ~ You have written this with great care and it is flawless!!!!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/19/2010
This is so moving and hit close to home, my daughters hubby is a fisherman but up until recently was usually only out on day trips but the poor catches etc forced him to go out on crab boats off Sable Island and he'll be gone days, sometimes weeks at a time. My daughter and grand daughter (5yrs old) miss him terribly as they are a really close and loving family. My daughter decided to take her and come to my place to make me breakfast to take her mind off her daddy not being there. It almost broke my daughters heart when she told her no thanks you go make breakfast for your father and I will stay home to make breakfast for my Dad...not knowing he wouldn't be there....
fee
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/19/2010
Pure poetry in magnificent style.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/19/2010
Quite a captivating piece, Karen.
Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo 6/19/2010
Karen: Very captivating and beautifully written.

Deborah
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/19/2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 6/19/2010
Memories,i.e.We Can Dream Can't We!!!

TRASK
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/19/2010
Beautifully written, Karen. God bless.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 6/18/2010
A beautiful keepsake in the poetry scrapbook, Karen...this one really sits well on the page and the photograph by Robert really adds texture to this whole piece...the references are just fabulous and the images bring this poetry to life...it regenerates the whole concept of a 24-hour day and the memories of a lifetime are rekindled. Be well you and Robert.

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/18/2010
well done,
Reviewed by David Maclellan 6/18/2010
I found you poem very evocative Karen. It made me consider that the beautiful places where we enjoy our moments in this present time, could once have been occupied by lovers in the past that were living in much more uncertain times. In my humble opinion this is a beautifully crafted verse.
Best regards, David.
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