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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
8/20/2010 |
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SO wonderfully heart touching that it brought me there
To feel sand on my feet and a salty breeze comb my hair.
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/5/2010 |
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| A beautiful Photo . I love the shades of the sea and sky line...The poem has wonderful visual images. It's filled with nostaliga and a winsomeness.........M |
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| Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) |
6/30/2010 |
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| I am both happy to read this and to know you had the moments to create this from. This one is very vivid and soft in the mind, as read. I was feeling myself there the whole time--thanks for a divine ride, Karen. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/29/2010 |
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A most engaging creative offering, Karen. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/27/2010 |
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Haunting, Karen. Beautifully written. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
6/26/2010 |
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Such a lovely work.
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
6/25/2010 |
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Beautiful! Beautiful "Withers the light" so comforting and serene,
"When darkness leaves and sky turns bright." What excellent poetry
Karen, and hats off to Robert for this outstanding picture! Thank
you both. May the Lord bless you with His presence and His peace!
Please give those adorable two hugs for me!!!!
Much Love,
Margaret |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
6/21/2010 |
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Peaceful. . . .
and Beautiful
Anticipation of sunrise
Warms the soul |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/21/2010 |
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YOUR PHRASES, RHYME AND RHYTHM PRODUCE SUCH A VIVID IMAGERY OF ONE STUNNING SCENE, AS...WITHERS THE LIGHT. A MOST IMPRESSIVE OFFERING... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
6/20/2010 |
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This is so smooth-flowing and lovely. I'm far from the ocean, and your picturesque descriptions of falling night made me feel the beauty of its transformation.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/20/2010 |
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Waves should coming with whispers from afar, it would be but the picture perfect for a perfect poem...
Georg
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
6/20/2010 |
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| Another wonderful piece of poetry. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/20/2010 |
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| a poem beautiful and alluring ... a natural spark of being ... |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/19/2010 |
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| And we pray that he comes home. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/19/2010 |
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Calmly and warmly expressed, Karen; your sensitivity shines here and your understanding of 'the bigger picture' comes through very well. Fine work.
John |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/19/2010 |
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A beautiful write Karen and I love the picture.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/19/2010 |
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This is stellar Karen poetry!!! I especially thought the ending stanza finishes this poem off perfectly!!! Lovely work my dear friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/19/2010 |
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| Masterfully said. You've either been there or have a fantastic imagination. Either way, you took me there. Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
6/19/2010 |
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Wonderfully written piece, Karen.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Karen Nivens |
6/19/2010 |
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| That's beautiful. I feel like I'm relaxing on a quiet beach at the base of a lighthouse wondering about all the lives that have past by and depended on its grace. You should send this to one of the many foundations trying to preserve lighthouses. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/19/2010 |
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| All heart and soul bared in love, and the throbbing feelings of your elegant words. Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
6/19/2010 |
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| A sweepingly romantic poem. You bring a pointillist sensibility to the picture you've drawn. I can hear Edward Mulhare reading this. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/19/2010 |
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| Karen, this is absolutely beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/19/2010 |
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This is absolutely beautiful Karen ~ You have written this with great care and it is flawless!!!!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/19/2010 |
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This is so moving and hit close to home, my daughters hubby is a fisherman but up until recently was usually only out on day trips but the poor catches etc forced him to go out on crab boats off Sable Island and he'll be gone days, sometimes weeks at a time. My daughter and grand daughter (5yrs old) miss him terribly as they are a really close and loving family. My daughter decided to take her and come to my place to make me breakfast to take her mind off her daddy not being there. It almost broke my daughters heart when she told her no thanks you go make breakfast for your father and I will stay home to make breakfast for my Dad...not knowing he wouldn't be there....
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/19/2010 |
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| Pure poetry in magnificent style. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/19/2010 |
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| Quite a captivating piece, Karen. |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo |
6/19/2010 |
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Karen: Very captivating and beautifully written.
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/19/2010 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
6/19/2010 |
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Memories,i.e.We Can Dream Can't We!!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/19/2010 |
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| Beautifully written, Karen. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/18/2010 |
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A beautiful keepsake in the poetry scrapbook, Karen...this one really sits well on the page and the photograph by Robert really adds texture to this whole piece...the references are just fabulous and the images bring this poetry to life...it regenerates the whole concept of a 24-hour day and the memories of a lifetime are rekindled. Be well you and Robert.
Love,
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
6/18/2010 |
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| well done, |
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
6/18/2010 |
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I found you poem very evocative Karen. It made me consider that the beautiful places where we enjoy our moments in this present time, could once have been occupied by lovers in the past that were living in much more uncertain times. In my humble opinion this is a beautifully crafted verse.
Best regards, David. |
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