If I Were You
by
Kathryn Seifert, Ph.D.
Saturday, November 11, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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If I were you, and you were me
I wonder, then, would we see?
What I do to you, I do to me.
Would it all seem very clear?
What is there, is also here.
If the beauty of a tree
Fills my soul, is it me?
Love of you, love of me,
Human, God, deer, or sea
Embrace them all, they are Me.
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| Reviewed by Stephanie Sawyer |
12/14/2008 |
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It seems rare that I find another author who has that lovely introspective quality about their work that you so beautifully expose here. The ability to paint into the inner core of the mind and illicit the reader to think and ponder is, indeed, a lovely talent to claim.
I hope you continue to develop it well, and to paint pictures in thought with questing, seeking, and pondering. We will all benefit and grow from such.
Stephanie S. Sawyer |
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
11/30/2008 |
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| You have written words, outside of the box. Your concept is one of imagination. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
7/15/2007 |
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The unity of the universe.
A profound truth in a superb write, Kathy.
Technically, very nice meter and cadence, as well.
Richard
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/11/2006 |
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I've got to concur. Thank you for this meaningful message, Kathryn. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by writerdawn |
11/11/2006 |
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| a moving poem with such a powerful message. enjoyed, Dawn |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
11/11/2006 |
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Beautifully written piece...enjoyed this.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
11/11/2006 |
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It is true Kathryn. Thanks for sharing these words.
Chanti |
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