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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/19/2009 |
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| Brilliant. Liz |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
10/17/2009 |
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Axilea - Thought provoking as always. Enjoy your language of images that expresses the spiritual journey. Many quotable lines, but I especially liked the paradoxical ending:
Emptied again,
yet embodied:
a cup, a circle, so full.
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/16/2009 |
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perceptive atmospheres of enlightened thought embellish this poetic mosaic with focus and adroitness ...
"My hand then puts together
opalescent feathers
like cards laid on the dinner table
in a place almost defined
between bread crumbs and dripping candles."
excellent visual ... |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/15/2009 |
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What magnificent writing, Axilea...
My hand then puts together
opalescent feathers
like cards laid on the dinner table
in a place almost defined
between bread crumbs and dripping candles.
You are indeed an inspiration.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/14/2009 |
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Often occurs in dreams...
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/14/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/14/2009 |
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"In a moment,all the sacred pieces(of me) are assembled to form
a whole." After reading your review, I came to read your new post...telepathy? Maybe. Wonderful metaphors in this Axilea...soft, beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/14/2009 |
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This is amazing Axilea, one of your very best, I could almost watch the transformation and feel the soft yet strong metamorphis of your soul and heart. A definate one to be published.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/13/2009 |
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Axilea,
The distinct feeling that I as a reader am intruding but am welcome nonetheless as you lead me through an exegesis of wants. This poem stimulates and enriches intellect, heart and spirit.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/13/2009 |
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| Yes, indeed... like the sun coming up with a healing and strengthening warmth and with consolation after a night of heavy fever. This speaks to me on several levels that I can't quite understand - like a language I recognise but have never learned. All I can do is to reiterate the lines so that their power invades where it will... and it does! Beautiful poetry that does what all good poetry should do: awaken, stimulate, mystify and surprise. xx |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
10/13/2009 |
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"So the mandala of peace appears
when Isis opens the chest
to suddenly free my heart
where revelations are written,
reflected in my irises at dawn."
I love these line and agree, this piece is exquisite. Live Well, Carin'
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/13/2009 |
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Exquisite, this holy hush of beauty - well done, Axilea.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/13/2009 |
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I love the little metaphors so subtly hidden throughout this poem. It leaves me feeling as though I am walking on personal holy ground... so I go, treading softly...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
10/13/2009 |
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| Dear Charlie, I was (not so) secretly hoping for you to do so. Irises are reflected in irises. And poems in poems. :) |
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| Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen |
10/12/2009 |
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Oh my, incredible.
Only from ones hand can be constructed these worths. Passion formed from Egyptian's
gold is best served only to a kindred soul that is old. And you have an old soul, and is seen in the tempered beauty of your words.
You have the eyes of a sage, the heart of an angel, and the wisdom of the ages lost in time.
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
10/12/2009 |
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| Mmmmm. I love this--a little flower of faith reawakening. I especially appreciate those "i.rise.s at dawn". I like yours better than mine, so I'll tuck these lines into my black bag when you're not looking... |
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