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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
8/19/2007 |
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Well done my friend...you've penned an excellent offering here my friend, enjoyed the imagery!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/19/2007 |
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George, good on you, good tanka.
thanks,
dan |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
8/18/2007 |
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| The trembling hands says it all to me. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/18/2007 |
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Oh!! Gotta agree with Eileen here!!
Take a sip before you walk...lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
8/18/2007 |
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| Love it :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/17/2007 |
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a glass too full is an accident waiting to happen
Well written, George!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
8/17/2007 |
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Recycled grapes! Dyes the mop red, taste buds bled...
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/17/2007 |
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I guess someone has to make sure the waiter keeps his job.
Rose |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
8/17/2007 |
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| Hope your hands doesn't tremble too much. Tidy poem. Victor |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/17/2007 |
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| If at first... |
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