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Author Unknown
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Vickie Yannuzzi
Friday, February 21, 2003
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written years passed, wanting to get feed back from author den's readers
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Have you ever read..
A great and touching poem or statement.
And your life and heart is pounding and expressing..
Emotions contained within..
That makes you see Life..
What is really true ,
Or have you seen beauty in surroundings..
As a flower, breeze or captured in a picture of art.
Whether it be a play or demonstration..
Of events passed or future..
Then it will say" Author Unknown.".
And suddenly Sadness fill your being..
For credit and glory should be told..
How foolish! We exclaim Who..
When down inside our soul,
The answer is told...
Lies the builder and the Maker
Of all the things, past, future, and yet untold...
Is His, and yet we fail to see...
His signature...
Our Lord the creator of all..
In this I claim for His glory! Evermore.
vickie Yannuzzi
March 5, 1979
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
2/22/2003 |
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| YES--beautiful and true! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
2/21/2003 |
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Yes I have and always wondered why they never signed it.,
Excellent write.
opeg |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
2/21/2003 |
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as a poet, and a preacher, i approach "religious poetry" with a level of unease. I find most religious verse to be bad at best. it uses traditional religious terms and concepts either in a traditional way which produces smaltz. or in a sort of pop religion sense which creates smaltzy heresy.
in this poem you have missed both smaltz and smaltzy heresy. as such it rates high marks--the trouble with it, and i acknowledge that the poem goes back 24 years, is that you did not "finish the check": you did not push the thought all the way home. What are the implcations of the phrase "..the Creator of all.."? How is is creation signed?
still this is a good write--
blessings
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
2/21/2003 |
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This was an excellent write!
God Bless
~Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/21/2003 |
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| Wow...excellent write!!...This made me think...thank u |
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