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| Reviewed by wendy Cooper (Reader) |
6/14/2008 |
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Very powerful piece. I hope the poetry helps you to heal.
God Bless
Wendy |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/6/2008 |
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Debra,
This write rises from the grave of my own memories as a child I have tried to bury.
Abuse in any form how horrid, and your write is excellenly speaking her suffering & her release from such a terror.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
12/17/2007 |
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A bold, powerful, gut-wrenching write on the savagery of parental abuse.
As you know, dear Debra, there is healing power in bringing the secret to light and in the shared understanding of others.
Life is a journey of experience that prepares us for God's greater work ahead. Survival is the promise of angelhood.
Bless you, Debra. Your future is to live in the heart of God.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
10/9/2007 |
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So dark, with just a little sparkle of hope.
Strong piece of poetry.
Greetings,
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/28/2007 |
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Impressive... impressionist... "In the Darkness" the reality flows.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
9/24/2007 |
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There is emotions that we cannot see and or feel...they are embedded within the memories of your poem....
nice work.....
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/23/2007 |
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| a very very powerful poem on a comradery even while in the throngs of darkness ... |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/21/2007 |
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Your poem made me cry, literally.
So moving, so real - no fiction hear, but the cries of a heart who knows ...
God bless you and your sister,
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
9/21/2007 |
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| Very powerful writing,enjoyed...HUgssss |
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| Reviewed by chris stienstra |
9/21/2007 |
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This is a powerful work.
Described as only one who "knows" would be able to relate. The "thieves" that steal from us as children will one day find that GRACE is not to be found in any lifetime. I appreciated that you struck the darkness with the light. Much appreciated.
With my best regards,
Chris |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/20/2007 |
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Wow, this is such a heartwrenching piece written with such clarity.....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Laura Mayer |
9/19/2007 |
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Very real and moving write Debra. Extremely heartbreaking.
Hugs, Laura |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/19/2007 |
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The compassion and frustration that normal parents feel for children who are put through any kind of abuse, physical, emotional, physcological or sexual is wrapped in this write. It speaks out for the ones who cannot speak out for themselves. Well done Deb.
Hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/19/2007 |
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| No one should be allowed to steal away someone's childhood and yet it happens far too often. Your poem is gut-wrenching and puts the reader right there. Excellent write, love Holly |
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