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|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|yes i agree with bonnie, it felt like you combined two poems into one, i was still with writer's block when you moved to another subject but it is well written and i can sympathize with the block|
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
I enjoyed this write, until I reached the
second to the last verse. It's a lovely
verse, but jumps too quickly from writing,
to spirituality. The last two lines blend
the subjects, but leaves the reader hanging.
Try another verse, before "Parched is the soul that".
Introducing spirit into writing. It will make it all
come together nicely for the reader.
It's a good write. Please accept my review in good faith,
as it is intended.
P.S. Please do the same for me. Thank You
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice write. I hate the times of drought. The ending is a gem.|