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Sunlight Illuminated A Hidden Treasure
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Walt Hardester
Saturday, December 27, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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There was once this formal wedding lunch.
Morning coat with cumbersome tails.
Not enough wind to raise my sails.
But fun there was still to be found,
Because there was sunlight all around.
My brother-In-Law's sister, Ivey,
What a hottie she be.
Was showing her wares,
But only to me.
I caught a glimpse of her loveliness,
Between me and the sun.
You see that day, fair Ivey did trip,
And had forgotten to wear her slip.
So the trusty sun illuminated her prize,
Right before my very eyes.
So pretty it was I almost shook,
And had to take another look.
Stealthily I did walk back for a longer spy,
But I didn’t look her in the eye.
My eyes were focused on her form,
Guessing what she would be like in the morn.
So there you go,
For all you men,
We get to see hidden treasures,
Now and again.
©2008 Walt Hardester
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
12/29/2008 |
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Cute one Walt now everytime the guys are around a lady and the suns out what do you think they'll be looking at or for. You are as Amber says cute and naughty. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
12/28/2008 |
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| lolol, this was so funny |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
12/28/2008 |
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| Walt, you have as terrific sense of humor -- or perhaps you are a bit naughty? -- either way, I enjoyed your story -- may peace and love be always with you -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/28/2008 |
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very cute and naughty, Walt, I like your sense of humor.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/28/2008 |
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Bad boys do that...shame on you...right place at the right time... you got me laughing...the sun can be cruel to us girls at times...but NOT to the lurking eyes of the naughty...naughty you!!
Love Tinka
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
12/28/2008 |
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I am a saint, I never look...well...heee...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/28/2008 |
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| Hope your brother doesn't read this, though "boys will be boys" & it wasn't your fault...;-) ed |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/27/2008 |
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LOL! You capture men, alright: when I'm wanting them to look me in the eyes, they're looking ... a bit lower. (These things aren't headlights, you know. BEEP BEEP!!) Well done, excellent write.
(((HUGS))) and love, and Happy New Year!, Karla. *beep* (THREE?!??) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/27/2008 |
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| right place at the right time! lucky moment for you!! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/27/2008 |
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Ho Ho Ho, I guess you were just a little naughty there Walt old son.
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