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| Reviewed by Shane Ward |
7/18/2009 |
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Words of wisdom on a theme experienced by many Walt. Your commentary is quite understated, depleted of all rage and tension, which in a curious way makes this poem a little stronger. Being who you are first is essential. You have to live up to your own expectations before living up to others.
Good luck with the quit smoking thing.
Shane |
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| Reviewed by Nance O'Donnell |
5/1/2009 |
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Walt love this.....don't lose yourself trying to please others. Be yourself you can only change yourself and your own thinking about certain situations and people. Thanks for sharing this.
Nance (POF) :) |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
4/11/2009 |
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Articulately written with a meaningful message. Very well written!
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/5/2009 |
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To this I can well relate, Walt. Painful and true. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
3/5/2009 |
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| Echoes of a weeping soul |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/4/2009 |
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Superb poem Walt! It's so sad that some of us seek to change those we love, and makes me wonder what we love in the first place if we
expect makeovers...Hope it gets resolved in your favor... |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
3/4/2009 |
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Oh Wally - a reach for stability, maybe? Hope you're doing good. Like the yearning here. Almost makes you sound you're a real person... ;-)
Love ya,
r` |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
3/4/2009 |
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| Wow! Well stated and true. It's often a tradeoff with vague sidelines or borders. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
3/3/2009 |
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An honest poem straight from your soul.I appreciate your honesty in this well written poem.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/2/2009 |
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| i do know what you mean--it is hrd sometimes but your compassion makes you who you are--don't change a thing! |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
3/2/2009 |
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| to change your personality and habits is to lose the real you -- love doesn't ask for those changes -- you gotta be you Walt, or it won't work my friend -- much peace and love to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/2/2009 |
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My such sadness is these emotional lines...I don't think you can ever love too much..it is when one does not love enough the heart may bleed...May your heart be healed!
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/2/2009 |
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Salty Walt me pirate swashbuckler you don't need no wiming but a keg of good ole rum and a matei to drink with! ! !
Ole Edvard the Irresistible
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/2/2009 |
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Oh dear, a heart wrenching write for sure Walt. One thing, we all must love ourselves first before we can love or be loved.
You are an amazing man, never forget that.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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