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| Reviewed by Chris Wright |
12/9/2007 |
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Now I ain't never heard it put like this, "Sweat straight
cumming
our my pores" but I love the remix and the pure passion embedded in these words. Keep up the hotness sista! |
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| Reviewed by Lorinne Pippen |
7/21/2007 |
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Very Nice... I truly like your writing style... PeAcE.
TF59. |
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| Reviewed by Masood Lohar |
12/30/2004 |
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| This poem is a true portrayel of the fragility of human kind. we slip down and stand up and then slip down again. this goes on and on, without knowing. This is very powerlful and romantic. "your lips entice me to sin", "Making me cheat on my man". Beautiful!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Mr Paton |
5/18/2004 |
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Passionate and sexy piece .
What a Dish..mmmmmm |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
4/30/2004 |
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| Hopefully they will. |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
2/7/2004 |
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| Passionate. |
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| Reviewed by Nura Ahmad (Reader) |
1/25/2004 |
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The poem "Attraction" is romantic which shows that the persona of the poem found a new love,hence(Making me cheat on my man).It also shows the submissiveness and devotion in loveas well as the understanding therein(our souls are one in the same).
I love it.It's indeed a nice poem!
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
8/20/2003 |
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A nice poem, Alonda.
Greetings from Atlanta. |
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