Oblivion
by Alexandra Midnight
Sunday, March 04, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It’s dark here,
And quiet
I’m alone and afraid
I feel hollow,
Wasted at the hands of time
To be whisked away by a whisper
As the world fades
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
3/6/2012 |
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Alexandra, The ending of the world as we know
it...darkness in every corner...sounds of silence
you tremble and have no one to hold. Great imaging.
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/6/2012 |
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An ending moment, to be sure. Darkly cast into oblivion.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/5/2012 |
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| a fleeting moment that engulfs the senses ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/5/2012 |
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Succinct but powerful in meaning and emotion expressed. Thank you, Alexandra. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
3/4/2012 |
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this is fantastic imagery...done well. thanks for sharing.
asa |
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