OLD MAN'S FAREWELL
by Gerald J Tate
Saturday, June 12, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Words cannot express, my thanks to you
'Cause you always did, what you had to do
And even when, I abused your trust
My loyal friend, you never fussed
When I over indulged, and so many times
Behind the scene's, you held the lines
From young to old, you never altered
You gave me life, and never faltered
I cannot see you, you have no face
But you're always there, steady in pace
Always working from dusk to dawn
A reliable friend, I depend upon
You cannot hear, you cannot see
Yet still, you try so hard for me
I didn't help you, I must confess
But still you stayed, and did your best
But i'm old and grey now, it's the final bell
And if you had a hand, I would shake it well
So it's farewell my friend, now we must part
So I thank you for everything, my fine little heart
Gerald J Tate
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/27/2010 |
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A nice sense of respect in this poem, and I like the rhythm, too. Well done:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/17/2010 |
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Gorgeuous poetry, Gerald!!!! Your rhythm is perfect! Loved it!
Hugs,
Anna |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/15/2010 |
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| Beautifully penned portrait of a true friend and the one we should always take the best care of. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/14/2010 |
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| Following your heart is it's own, sometimes painful reward. Well done. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/13/2010 |
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| Splendidly done good man, missed you, but I've been watching for you. Really like this one. Welcome back. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/13/2010 |
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| beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/13/2010 |
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splendid poem, Gerry, well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/13/2010 |
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Oh my... Excellent writing sweet man..sure have missed you and your wonderful writing,I posted a poem the other day ..I haven't been in here for awhile hope you are doing ok ..Hugsssss
Love,
Chanti Lace |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/13/2010 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti |
6/12/2010 |
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| An outstanding poem, Gerry, good job. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
6/12/2010 |
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Gerald,
You make us wonder who the friend is until the very friend. Funny, how much we can abuse our bodies and still our hearts forgive us...usually. God Bless You.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/12/2010 |
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| Nice thoughts, hope whoever it is you cannot shake hands with is not shedding his human fold and leaving this life altogether...e |
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