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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
2/22/2010 |
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An excellent title that illustrates the experience very effectively. Your word choice explores the difficulty of feeling helpless until we find the way to our own words again.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
2/17/2010 |
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Dale -
I never thought of THAT! Without a center, your course/heart and thoughts are off balance...
and YESsss! This can happen and does!
Love your detailed description without a a close accident starting...lol
Creative to boot!
Blessings and Harmony, SOULFUL_PaSsionsSHEEoxxo
Come and take a peek if time allows you... I hope your not caught in the headlights, when viewing... |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
2/12/2010 |
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| You have captured my prison of emotions, when I loose my center. Wonderful write, I needed this captive verse, somehow I do not feel so lonely. Warmth and Love to you, Carin |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
2/12/2010 |
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| I think this must happen to most of us but your description is perfect Dale. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
2/11/2010 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
2/10/2010 |
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"...roll with the punches" All one can do when they're caught in the wheel and under. Thankfully the wheel keeps going 'round and we go up again. Great write, Dale!
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
2/10/2010 |
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Dale,
This is how I feel these days, dazed and confused..I need to find my center once again, I wish it would stop snowing! We all need the heat and comfort of the summer sun..
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/9/2010 |
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| a wonderful write -such depth of emotion, well put |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/9/2010 |
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| ;-) |
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