|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|An excellent title that illustrates the experience very effectively. Your word choice explores the difficulty of feeling helpless until we find the way to our own words again.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
I never thought of THAT! Without a center, your course/heart and thoughts are off balance...
and YESsss! This can happen and does!
Love your detailed description without a a close accident starting...lol
Creative to boot!
Blessings and Harmony, SOULFUL_PaSsionsSHEEoxxo
Come and take a peek if time allows you... I hope your not caught in the headlights, when viewing...
|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|You have captured my prison of emotions, when I loose my center. Wonderful write, I needed this captive verse, somehow I do not feel so lonely. Warmth and Love to you, Carin|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I think this must happen to most of us but your description is perfect Dale.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|"...roll with the punches" All one can do when they're caught in the wheel and under. Thankfully the wheel keeps going 'round and we go up again. Great write, Dale!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
This is how I feel these days, dazed and confused..I need to find my center once again, I wish it would stop snowing! We all need the heat and comfort of the summer sun..
Much peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a wonderful write -such depth of emotion, well put|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack