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horizon at midnight by Dale Clark Friday, February 26, 2010 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
horizon at midnight detour, road closed backtracking into the belly of the beast this self destructive defeatist hangs by a hair to what is shaky or unsteady falling and rising inevitably caught up in this surreal spin this state of limbo or destiny which imperils the journey upon life's ups and downs missing the scenery driving late at night searching for a vision not unlike the sun which is always chasing the moon scattering stars and phantoms this struggle with shadows as light streaks tremble flexing night and day I peer into the horizon where the moon hangs upside down as a yellow orange sliver along this southeasterly view and wonder how I missed it 2-26-10 D.E. Clark

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Reviewed by Z McClure	3/14/2013

I liked your use of the journey towards the horizon to reflect upon our inner ups and downs and the glimpses of certainty alternating with life's uncertainties. A well-written poem enjoyable on several levels. We may be detoured, but we're bound to finally see that upside down moon! -Zach




Reviewed by Kate Burnside	3/2/2010

a surreal view, Dale... which is probably what it's like after long hours on the road, driving as it were along horizon's edge. Perspective is a funny thing... even funnier when exhaustion also kicks in. I think your Big Country skies must be amazing territories to keep pace with and traverse at sunrise and sunset... our little British ones are usually hampered by terrestrial impediments and restricted views! I enjoyed this downside-up view as I journeyed with you! :)) xx




Reviewed by Liana Margiva	2/28/2010

VERY NICE!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	2/26/2010

i like this very much-i think it is both realistic and metaphoric-nice




Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)	2/26/2010

Great piece of work. Enjoyed.




Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G	2/26/2010

As the JOURNEY Continues, looks like you know the direction you must venture toward Dale! Good to know... YOUR IMAGERY IS EXPRESSIVE, God Bless Write On! Read On! Blessings and Harmony,PurplePassionsSHEE




Reviewed by Elizabeth Price	2/26/2010

Seems like you found your answer after your struggling journey. Great. Liz