When My Body Rules
by Southern Comfort
Monday, July 13, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Sometimes our body demands to rule and we bow to it's will.
My eyes devours your body, as my desire burns bright,
You will be the chosen one, that graces my bed tonight.
My fingers splay against your lips, silencing any speech,
The only communication, are meeting bodies, the ultimate high to reach.
Gentle whispers of removed silk,sigh, as you expose my skin,
Nipples strain for attention, pleading for lips and tongue to blend.
Quickly rock, hard flesh is comsumed within,
With a welcoming suck, as a warm, moist tongues descends.
The mingling of tongue and nipple, causes joy untold,
The tale of a thousand delights is about to unfold.
My helpless body, trembles and reacts,
Your bold assault pushes me to the brink,with no turning back.
I feel my desire bubble up, pool, then stream,
Transported, higher, on an orgasmic dream.
Your passionate kiss graces my lips,
It silences my joyful cry, as into my Love Grotto you slip.
Bodies united, rocking to and fro,
Sweet nectars exchanges, to mingle and flow.
Soon victory is won, the victors are want and need,
This is the answer to the body's plead.
With no promises of forever, there is just here and now,
When the body rules, the will must bow.
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|Reviewed by Portia Burton
|ummm, too hot for me!|
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|Whew wonderfully done
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|HOT AND full Of Intense Passions, the Body KNOWS! YOU told it sensually well S.C. Loved it!
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|SC, You are GOOD!!
|Reviewed by Tony May Sr.
|Wow Southern ... I'm still thinking and contemplating the visuals of this piece ... Hmmmmm I never suspected you were so in touch, nice write.|
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|Must be the heat there, sugar. Wow! Love Holly|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|When you're hot your're hot and SC is hot a lot!!|
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|XXXtra special; a southern wind!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Am Glad to see you back
Now I can read about desires I thought were only
Within my thougts and dreams.
Enjoying your return "Comfort"
Love & peace
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|'when the body rules, the will must bow' Yep lol ;)|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|passion commands the body ...
well done ...
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Like rubbing oneself with chili pepper until "it" cries uncle!!!
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|One HOT write. Very nice.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|My helpless body, trembles and reacts...
Obviously, Sweet Comfort, I'm glad to see you're back.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh what a delight to read your sensuous words again, welcome back. Fine, delicate beauty within your words and no, no promises of forever to spoil the here and now...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Break out the fire extinguisher, the ceiling fan ain't enough here. Great stuff!
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
My bicycle misses you, as do I, Sissy.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|When passion is set on fire, it is hard to put it out. Honest and real. Thanks for sharing, SC. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YOUR OPINION IS RESPECTED AND CERTAINLY IS SUPPORTED SOLIDLY WITH GREAT PHRASES AND VIVID IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * INSPIRATIONS|