by Southern Comfort
Thursday, July 16, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A woman possesses strong magic, that can make a man her willing Love Slave.
My hips suggestively sway,
Making you want to heed their call without delay.
Ivory mounds of flesh, crest and fall,
My invitation to answer desire's call.
Come immerse yourself in the sweetness lying within,
While welcoming arms, offer a haven, where bodies unite and blend.
Here awaits a soft body, wrapped in Jasmine Scent,
An offering upon Love's Alter, a willing sacrament.
Your temptation, primal, wild and free,
Come dive into my ocean and drown in me,
Abracadabra!my sultry eyes cast a spell,
It will bring great joy, making you glad you fell.
Drink freely from the honey pot of my lips,
As you explore the hidden treasure between my hips.
As you sink into my quicksand abyss,
You become mindless and numb, unaware of the risk.
Your raw desire drags you down,
As I swallow you whole and within me you drown.
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|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Yes women have all the power
Just look back into history
Delilah, Helen Of Troy, Eve, Cleopatra,
Salome, etc, etc,etc,.....all naughty & deadly gals
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|I need Nibbins Sissy..........Nibbins|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Dear Comfort, how could a guy (me) resist this invitation
to dive into your ocean and explore your hidden treasure?
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|Love it SC! Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
|So where exactly do you live? (JOKING) Nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Twisted Words
|Your thoughts, as always well expressed. So nice to read you again. Us men love it when a woman chooses to work her magic.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|What an erotic gem... well done!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Abracadabra said the lady and here comes a beau with a bone...for the little dog! LOL
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Mesmerizing and tantalizing to say the least...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YOUR PRESENTATION IS UNIQUE AND YOUR IMAGERY, DRAWN WITH GOOD PHRASES AND RHYME, IS VIVIDLY CLEAR. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Yes indeed, SC. A woman can do that... ...and even more. Thank you for sharing this sensual gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis (Professor Dreamy)
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Wonderful images, tantalizing and so so erotic and of course inviting:
"dive into my ocean and drown in me"..."sink into my quicksand abyss"
thank goodness the fire brigade has arrived!