by Southern Comfort
Sunday, July 26, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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When desire runs HOT, it makes you SIZZLE
The sight of your body, ignites my slumbering desire and I Sizzle,
Arousal flows through me, causing nectar to start to drizzle.
You smile as I begin to smolder.
Your passive hand grasps my breast and your lips kiss my shoulder.
Your kiss deepens, as it nibbles my neck,
Shivers of delight rock my body, causing any resistance to crash and wreck.
Your continued advances, makes me come undone,
My peaceful surrender crowns you the victor, you have won.
Your hands, tongue and lips, ravage the prize,
Your victory song, is my moaning sighs.
While delving into my hidden treasure, with a tongue of flame,
Sweet agony is mine, as I chant your name.
Desire's volcano erupts, hot lava flows within me,
I writhe, burn and sizzle, with no wish to flee.
I am a blazing inferno, knowing sweet death looms near,
My body screams its surrender, for my sweet death is here.
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|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Yep! Hot stuff
Most enjoyable read and write
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|So hot SC, love it....Holly|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|SC, you have again championed the cause for good writing. This short piece rdminded me of a country song from the 70's titled "Love on a hot summer day" Well done!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|and 'Sizzle' you do SC, very hotly ;)|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|SC your words will make anyone sizzle, Do you know what you are doing to poor Georg, yes Georg help is on the way, lol. Thank you Sc for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my...this is so Hot sweet lady enjoyed very much...keep smiling...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Is there anywhere where people can buy Viagra by the hundredweight?
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|SC we have all missed your special erotic blend of romance and passion that steams up the screen and leaves the reader gasping for breath and longing for love.. Well done.
|Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
|really great poem. very hot I like it|
|Reviewed by Brenda Dobson
|Whew!!!! Sizzle on lady, for real!!! :) Brynn|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Appropriately titled! I can certainly feel the burn! Well done ~ Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Sweet death indeed! Wonderful, wonderful!
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I FEEL IT SIZZLING Comfort!
No doubt about it, and I feel romance HOT TO THE TOUCH!
What "I" love about your writing is: It's short, HOT and unbelievably INTENSE, your style knocks me into left field....
|Reviewed by Rey C
|smoldering embers, never extenguished. Aten|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|OMG, this does sizzle. Excellent.|