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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
10/19/2009 |
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Really nice work, Amber.
I also like your 'main quote' from the Dalai Lama. |
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
10/14/2009 |
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| Really like it. From the first line I was drawn in and couldn't wait to see how it would finish. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
10/13/2009 |
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| The union of two souls in Indigo!... A beautiful sharing Amber!....M |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/13/2009 |
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a galactic collision...and we became one.
Beautifully sensuous, Amber. I think I'd better
start listening to that Zen music.
Indigo is the way to go.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
10/12/2009 |
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| love the energy, the color, the vision Amber...shine on! |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/12/2009 |
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| A polyrythmic paean of sensuality leading me to the obvious but tasteful humming of "Mood Indigo". Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/12/2009 |
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| this is lovely--a soul-mate kinda feel to it! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/11/2009 |
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| Wonderful imagery, Amber and well written. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
10/11/2009 |
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I feel explored & found within celestial passions
and I also feel released into the unison of Love
Much Love & Inspirational Profusions
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/11/2009 |
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| Beautiful. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
10/11/2009 |
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| a time not only of meeting but of renewal, enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/11/2009 |
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| A lovely write, Amber. Attraction and love mixed with cosmic forces bring a bit of fantasy (as Shelia stated). Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/11/2009 |
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| enchantingly colorful anticipatory passion, exploring union and mystical consummation ... beautiful imagery ... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/11/2009 |
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Beautiful, Amber, image and poem - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/11/2009 |
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Fantastic poem and image, Amber; just perfect! Well done, (((my dear))); brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/11/2009 |
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A spiritual joining. For me, there is a feeling of reality mixed with fantasy. It's similar to the way we live our lives, with dreams and goals. And what better dreams than the romantic ones? I love your description of the evening breezes and that first encounter. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/11/2009 |
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| Fabulous imagery and envisioning in this poem, Amber, which lifts each one of us into the brightness and intense energies to which you allude. The picture you choose is spot-on to complement your words, too. It's also a most beautiful and burning personification of The Soulmate, and of the orgiastic effects of intermolecular combination on every conceivable level. I love that the way to this sublime passion is rooted in clarity, cleansing and healing, paving the way for an absolutely flawless union. On a personal note, engaging with the healing aspects of this write, I am fascinated by Sage's mention of the pineal gland, which has very much been on my own mind this weekend: my husband has just been diagnosed as suffering a very rare sleep malfunction, Rapid-Eye-Movement Behavioural Disorder, in which his muscles are fully activating during dreaming (the same as if he's awake). This makes for the disturbing and very often violent manifestation that he is actually acting out/living his dreams because sleep paralysis does not occur. Melatonin is one of the things we are thinking of trying in order to suppress these alarming nightly occurences.... Quite the antithesis of the beautiful scenario you so vividly paint for us here! Uplifting and inspirational write, bless you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
10/11/2009 |
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| You must have a lovely aura, Amber, as your words are enchanting and colourful - you cover the spectrum with this poem! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/11/2009 |
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Amber, such clarity in image and power of force, I could envision your vision...does that make sense?...well I think I might need to start meditating....powerful poem!
Love,Christine |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/11/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL AND ROMANTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/11/2009 |
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A summer night on a peaceful Japanese garden looking up at the universe as from the bamboo's patch a samisen's strings laments gives comfort to a soul tied down to Earth with solitude.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/10/2009 |
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Deosil! Chock-full of energy and clockwise. Spinning on a rotating platform, Indigo illuminates heart and soul, Amber...this is the inside guts of neutrons, atoms, testosterone and estrogen! A merge of emergence...chakra merges with animal magnetism on the scale of ascension...pineal gland intact...
Love,
Sage |
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