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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/17/2009 |
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Choices can be difficult so maybe we can mix them a bit. A great write Amber.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/16/2009 |
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| perhaps we can live in both ... |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/16/2009 |
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| I'll take Nirvana please, I think??? You give us much to consider Amber. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/15/2009 |
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| You have a lot of company Amber. Many including me has pondered this,and it's sort of always there with no real choice, at least not yet;-) Well done thought provoking poem... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/15/2009 |
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| Am running with quite a medley of thoughts, myself, but definitely with Sage's tandem of reality together with whatever reality we choose to create - and I don't mean this a a "cloud-cuckoo-land" fantasy but as our chosen fact: there is no doubt that we are responsible for what our realities are, both internally and externally. Your "living" stanza did it for me: living what you mean has to be the way to go. All else is sham. Since I took up writing in 2004, I have been on a "reality crusade", lifting the many masks. Something indeed has got to give... Thanks for this thought-provker, Amber! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/15/2009 |
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| Nirvanaland sounds good to me. Nice one. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/15/2009 |
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| I think we can mix and match....:) |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/15/2009 |
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| Life is all about choices and how we perceive things. Excellent write, Amber. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/15/2009 |
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| it all comes down to choice-well said! |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
10/15/2009 |
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My thinking is we create our own reality by what we think about and concentrate on...therefore it is our choice! I enjoyed this...
I recently read a book about Fractal time...fascinating! Love and Hugs Amber, Diana |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/15/2009 |
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The grass is always greener.... We never stop wanting. Thought provoking, Amber.
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/15/2009 |
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Hmmmmnnnn
Mydself I was always frightened by Alice in Wonderland. I think the author of that one must have smoked one two many leafs if you know what I mean, but to be serious, I think we create our own Nirvana in our hearts and our minds. It is not something that can be forced, pressured or given ultimatums...just slow easy offerings of what could be.
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/15/2009 |
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Only you can decide, where your heart will live
How true, for each and every one of us. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/15/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/15/2009 |
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A fractal life repeating itself until reaching Nirvana? is that Wonderland? (so...72 virgins are out of the question? LOL)
Georg
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/15/2009 |
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Wonderland or Nirvana? It's not an ultimatum, but rather a conscious choice in tandem with reality, living guilt-free. A lot of thought went into this piece, Amber...you have an instinctive ability to compose spontaneously...be well.
s |
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