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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/21/2009 |
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| You've melded thoughtfulness with playfulness to bring more than the normal depth to the page. Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/20/2009 |
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| Very, very clever and insightful. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/19/2009 |
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| Very clever ideas and images woven together seamlessly in delightful plainspeak, Amber. The short lines as statements certainly capture the raw energy, verve and momentum of such defragmentation swirling and congealing together. I especially like how you've inverted our expectation where de- usually means to detract, dismantle (whereas here obviously it is the opposite, as is consistent with the root word's meaning). And how the first two stanzas are mirrors of each other. A rapturous helter-skelter, exuberant and breathless, that instills a sense of invincibility. I like! :)) TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/19/2009 |
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You took us there! Standing ovation! This is what poetry is supposed to look like! Embryonic. Merged from the womb soulful poetry pouring from the slit, twin souls born into the Light, Amber...nourishing plenty of onward moments, you and he...
Love & Kindredness,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/19/2009 |
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,,words to rebuild one's being...inspired by one whom radiates positive energy :)
Love,Christine
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/19/2009 |
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| beautifully inspired poem! when life is fragmented, hopefully it will come together by the winds of inspiration ... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/19/2009 |
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A PERFECT POEM THAT CHEERS 'LOVE'...LOVE THAT VEERS AWAY FROM THE 'NORM' OF HEARTBREAK BUT....THE 'IDEAL' OF EVERLASTING. EXCELLENT! THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/19/2009 |
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Very unique and origianal and love the tail at the end of the word flow...trails off like into the mystic. Well done.
fee |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/19/2009 |
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| Love the message and the form too. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/19/2009 |
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Souls entwined like comet's halos and that odd asteroid of broken promises colliding now and then head on, to remind us that our universe does hide secrets...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/19/2009 |
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| This title and poem suggest some very profound thinking. An interesting write. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
10/19/2009 |
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this is so true Viv...Nothing can divide the soul of love
the sustenance of love's strength truly is
inseparate & immeasurable
Peace & Inspiration
Vickie
Love The Curves :)
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/18/2009 |
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| Amber,how fantastic it would be! I hope it is real for you! Very artistic too!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/18/2009 |
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| Amber, this is so beautifully written. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/18/2009 |
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The rapture of two souls joined and each enlightening the other, simply magnificent...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/18/2009 |
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| i agree-this is so much how i feel! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/18/2009 |
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| "Souls entwined for eternity." A description of "love", the true bonding agent of the universe, which transcends all lesser energies prone to chaos and break-up. Wonderful stuff! |
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