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| Reviewed by Daniel Gereige |
11/8/2009 |
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| Great Poem!!! Well Done!! |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/28/2009 |
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| Very, very true and very well penned as well. Thank you, hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/27/2009 |
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| Existentialism at its best. Lovely. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/26/2009 |
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Very intense look at the way our universe and time comes together in life forces of energy that we can't always control...
FEe |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/26/2009 |
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| Amber, one of your very best. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/26/2009 |
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| Such a beautiful and meaningful write. Our spirits are so much more than most of us can imagine! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/26/2009 |
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| Yesterday is history, tomorrow's a mystery, today our only gift...that's why they call it the present. I think that's from King Fu Panda or something. You'll find wisdom in the strangest of places sometimes. Great poem, wonderfully penned. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/26/2009 |
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What a beautiful way to send your mind off to beautiful dreamland Amber.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/26/2009 |
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..in a nut shell you wrapped this perfectly,,such wisdom Amber
Love,Christine |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/26/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
10/26/2009 |
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and the beauty of love permeats into our souls
through the glorious setting & rising of moments
"This Very Moment In Time" Beautiful Viv!
Peace, Love & Embracing You!
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/26/2009 |
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Life starting with a sigh of a awakening morning and ending with the yawn of a sundown...the very moment in time.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/26/2009 |
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| Wise and beautiful writing, Amber. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
10/25/2009 |
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| so much awakens when we are in the moment... |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
10/25/2009 |
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I am looking inward at this very moment thinking how much you touch my life with your words. Wonderful!
annie |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/25/2009 |
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Coherent composition, Amber...a sequel to your Souls Re-United...the last stanza and the last three lines are incalculable, as infinity holds no bounds, and of course our destiny is shot out there in space somewhere, why we relish This Very Moment In Time until time to move on to another plane. Your focus is very focused and once again, you leave us some thoughts to ponder...
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/25/2009 |
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| such wisdom, depth and beauty here-loved it! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/25/2009 |
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| we move forward to enlightened worlds when we allow ourselves to see the gravity within them ... |
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