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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
5/3/2012 |
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| will it ever return? dreamers cannot help but hope it will. beautiful poem that touches the soul. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
4/26/2012 |
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A cry worthy poem *Amber V*
with your chosen words to heed!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
4/26/2012 |
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| Very enjoyable poem, Amber |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
4/25/2012 |
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Amber, Yes,we can, but will we?
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
4/24/2012 |
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| I like these lines: "churning my thoughts/of pleasure bound memories/into real life melodies." And "Man and beast were joined in joy." is full of jubilance; those words are beautiful. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/24/2012 |
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I often dream of the time when man and nature were in balance. As you point out in this poem, it was a time of abundance, too.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/24/2012 |
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The cadence of the drum, be it an Native war drum, the British snare drum or the Thompson drum always seems to stir a fire in the hearts of men. Well done amber.
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/24/2012 |
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The harmony and peace to go forth. Beautiful thoughts in heart
and mind Amber. Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/24/2012 |
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| Where has this harmony gone? A profound question--one we must answer with action for Mother Earth |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
4/24/2012 |
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Let us honor earth every day, let us all see and feel what she brings to us that has been provided through Universal love for us. Lovely tribute Thank you
Love and Light |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/24/2012 |
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your fourth stanza:
"The harmony among all creatures
was something that was natural
and not questioned.
Mand and beast were joined in joy."
is a splendid ideal, Amber, and my hope is we
can return to that sort of Eden but something
tells me it'll be too difficult for us
to undo all the damage we've caused - i hope i'm wrong.
This is fine work indeed.
john |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/24/2012 |
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Where has this harmony gone?
Can we ever get it back?
I'm sadly beginning to doubt that more and more, unless many, many more actually soon start to care. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
4/24/2012 |
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It is often hard to go back in time, you would have to get the world to agree and give it the time it needs. Great write Amber.
Rose |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/24/2012 |
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Truly a moving and very meaningful write Amber written so amazingly as always and beautiful photo indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
4/24/2012 |
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I can hear your character Karena saying this...An Earthen Cry is timely...Tom Toms covered with new hide to summons all...be well, Amber.
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/24/2012 |
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| Ah, Amber, the world isn't being destroyed, no I think not. I really don't believe man as hard as we may try will be able to destroy this planet. You think differently, and I understand that and have no problem with it. |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
4/24/2012 |
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Amber,
very well penned would that people will listen and hear.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/23/2012 |
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| nature's drum beats in the heart your words ... inspired and beautifully written, Amber ... |
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