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Truth and Understanding
by Amber V Moonstone
Friday, May 11, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I feel that I have caused a very dear friend some pain, this is to you, and I am truly sorry if I have stepped over that line...

Truth and Understanding
by Amber "V" Moonstone

There is a line that is drawn
so clearly defined and visible,
This line never erases
nor does it step over the other side.
When the line is crossed,
one can feel the outcome,
the consequences for stepping over,
the point of no return.
That line, invisible as it may appear
still exists in all facets of your life,
It is an unspoken rule
that you never break.
It can be a fine line,
but never the less,
still a line that divides right and wrong.
On occasions, the line is crossed,

Chances are taken
living out of the box,
supercedes sensibility.
Sense never crosses over that line,
Only courage and boldness
marches right on by.
This can sometimes be miscontrue d
as selfish or non-caring.

Misunderstandings occur.
So if you find yourself stepping over that line,
be sure to tell the people involved,
what you're true motivations are,

and be ready to hear their truth!
Truth and Understanding (c) Amber "V" Moonstone



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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 5/20/2012
I like this poetic expression Viv
depending on the line crossed is crucial
I crossed a line one time with one of my
friends back in the day with a big passionate kiss on their lips
wow they were
I say "You Only Live Once!"
Love's Truth & Endearments
...and understanding
Vickie xx
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 5/17/2012
sweet lady if you have ever crossed a line it must surely have only been with the best intentions
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 5/17/2012
Honesty of thy heart cannot be contained by dimensional boundaries,
but only by those who choose not to hear, which is a barrier built not by trust,
but the hand of one who does not understand.
Time may be the only key to unlock this door.
I hope you don't have to wait on its threshold.

Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/15/2012

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/14/2012
beautifully said--
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 5/13/2012
Every phrase is in such an authentic voice, such warmth to revel in!
I find this refreshingly open and honest ~
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 5/13/2012
Amber, this is so honest and courageous, no one could surely resist it's heartfelt words...
Love, Diana...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/13/2012
You are so right. There is a fine line, and sometimes that fine line is our undoing. Thanks for teaching us.

Reviewed by Asa Seeley 5/12/2012
what can one say after they've said...i'm sorry? thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 5/12/2012
Let the healing begin
*Amber* your heart is
in the right place
for it to happen!!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by John Domino 5/12/2012
Very expressive and heartfelt poetry. Sometimes folks do not know where the line is and they cross it right before our eyes. It happens all too often when we are driving. There are lines and limits folks ignore. When they cross my path and speed away I think that may be the only race they have won the whole day. Amen...
Reviewed by John Flanagan 5/11/2012
if you have offended, Amber, then this
elegant, truthful offering will for sure heal the wounds

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 5/11/2012
Very expressive visual poem Amber.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 5/11/2012
Hopefully your poem will be read and understood by the one who needs to hear your words. We have all unintentionally steeped over the line at least once. Your write is a better way than most of righting it.
Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo 5/11/2012
Amber....We are all guilty of crossing boundaries. It takes time to understand why and learn how to set them.

God Bless you,
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 5/11/2012
Short accounts with ourselves and others is the way to live.
Reviewed by D. Vegas 5/11/2012
Yes, Amber, I too have crossed that line-I think our opinions get overstepped. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/11/2012
This is true. Hopefully this poem will cause some understanding and goodwill.
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