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Dream
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Mary E Gober
Monday, June 11, 2007
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A poem about dreams. Dedicated to my Mother. This piece is my award winning poem from 2004.
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The best time to fly,
To be swept away,
To love,
To give the performance of life,
To run with the wind,
To be free,
To be you,
To care about what you do,
To live forever,
To be whatever you feel like being.
To float away from the Pain,
The Hate,
The Anger,
The Fear,
To understand the build up of confusion in your heart and mind,
To be able to cry and not care about others opinions,
To find that you can smile and mean it,
Is the time to...Dream.
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
11/9/2009 |
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| Well written, Mary |
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| Reviewed by Carvin Wallson |
8/31/2009 |
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| In my dreams, I'm usually rich or successful in some other way, then I wake up and it's back to the mill to churn out more well-rounded teenagers. I actually have recurring dreams about food. I'm at the grocery store, and I'm on a shopping spree. I can get anything I want. I think I might have an obsession with food, but, for now at least, it's still a healthy one. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/26/2009 |
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Passionately penned! Enjoyed the style of your poem. Like the others, I hope you intend to post more poetry to Author's Den. Enjoyed reading this one.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/24/2009 |
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Excellant and I hope you will post more poetry in the future for I will look forward to reading and reviewing it if you do.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Glen Manese |
3/7/2009 |
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| Mary - I believe all you need is a podium and being this is dedicated to your mother is even a more pleasant read to the reader... Thanks for sharing your work... |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/27/2008 |
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I like your style!
UNIQUE! |
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| Reviewed by richmond engelke |
7/6/2008 |
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| all things that pass at the gift of llife nice writing |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
3/20/2008 |
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| Good advice in a great poem. fits my needs for today and tomorrows. |
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| Reviewed by Chuck Keller |
8/6/2007 |
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I'm a big fan of "Dream" poems. Good job.
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
6/21/2007 |
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Hi Mary! I read your poem, "Dream". I found that it opened my mind a little more and made me think about following my dream. Wishing you all the best. Please feel free to check out my site at Yahoo 360 or
right here in the "Den" |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
6/15/2007 |
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ah yes...where would we be without our dreams?
This is good...great flow....almost a list poem. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
6/11/2007 |
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Where would the world be without dreamers and their dreams?
Dreams give us relief from the now and hope and faith in the future.
Mary, your lovely poem reveals a heart that feels and understands life and demonstrates an ability to express the feelings we all have but sometimes can't quite bring to the surface.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
6/11/2007 |
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| and its that time now. |
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