Apart
by
William P Haynes
Thursday, November 15, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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a poem of sorts
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Cyber love, a crush, a passion, a curse
Can we feel real love so very far apart
In both distance and age
When we chat there is no distance
no miles; no years, and for hours we're together
yet apart, sharing secrets and loneliness
Needing one another but never truly knowing
If there is ever truth to promises
Typed out on a page
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
4/11/2008 |
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um..er..been there done that..have come to no valid conclusion..however miracles DO happen even at a distance.. :)
Blessings,
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
3/9/2008 |
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All I can say is: "LISTEN TO YOUR HEART" your heart KNOWS!
I was here and it was believable and intense and being friends gave it strength!
Going on 6 yrs. but we are together now! with 3 growing kids, on his side too- and he is a muscian, builds tube Amps, and his passion Computers and Harley, and I'm there sTrongly! :)
Believe William, it can BE!
I want you happy! and when you are ready in your life/heart - It will be!
As both will make it a reality!
If ready...
STay Positive!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace,Warrior Purple Lady Sheoxooo
Write On!Good therapy for growth! |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
12/5/2007 |
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In order for love or friendships to exist, I think, that's where our senses, first must come into play... monitor to monitor, words can't do it alone.
A part ...no, it's a very little one, in cyberspace.
A very smart poem, indeed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/22/2007 |
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This gives one pause for thought, William. Best wishes to you with love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
11/15/2007 |
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| interesting read |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
11/15/2007 |
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| A very smart poem. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/15/2007 |
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Oh the cyber world of love, yes I know this all too well!!! First thought, no, you cannot believe the promises, because if they are doing this with you, then the likely hood is that they are doing it with many others. Just a rule of thought, not necessarily in your particular case, but just be careful out there..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" |
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