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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
3/15/2013 |
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| well done-very romantic.....may I have this dance with you? |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/31/2010 |
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oh how we danced!
Do I detect a few smoldering embers of remembering? |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/27/2010 |
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| Very descriptive words, but sounding much like someone who is just recovering from a big hurt. Hope they are fictional, rather than autobiographical. Nicely done Pat. Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
7/27/2010 |
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Yeah Pat, sock it to him! It is a good feeling when you're passed the hurt. May happiness shine brightly upon you,
Best regards,
David |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
7/27/2010 |
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"Safe from the fire of remembering." What a great line! Good poetry!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/26/2010 |
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Beautiful...
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
7/26/2010 |
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| Splendid poem, Pat |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/25/2010 |
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Wonderful, love this Pat!!!!
This is a fabulous tribute!
Blessings,
Christine |
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