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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
5/6/2012 |
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| A thought to ponder without answer from time to time and end to end..This has many areas in which to dwell.....Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/18/2012 |
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| Even when the truth hurts, ignoring it won't make it disappear. A child caught in a lie, especially a lofty one, will certainly cry, even if the lie was not their own. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/18/2012 |
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I sense some deeper meaning… Some sorrow… Some pain… That I cannot fathom in this poem.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/17/2012 |
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| children are the first to say it straight. probably cry for lack of fairy tales and the truth in sarcasm. great write. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/17/2012 |
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Deeply felt and powerful.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/16/2012 |
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| It is strange...is it not that children are adept at filtering out the truth from a lie. Well done |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/16/2012 |
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Wow! This one speaks volumes..........nicely done, Pat! It's amazing sometimes how a few cleverly penned phrases read like a thickly bound book!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/16/2012 |
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Children cry for not to understand the truth be told.
Excellent write Pat.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
4/15/2012 |
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| This is so moving! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/15/2012 |
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when fairy tales are too serious
to be laughed at or ignored..
excellent work, Pat, right to the truth
john |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
4/15/2012 |
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Children remember the lies long after they realize they are lies and not truth. Damn good write.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
4/15/2012 |
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Pat, We all have been told lies, but when you lie
to a child, they know they are being lied to and
therefore they do cry. Short and full of wisdom!
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/15/2012 |
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Back in "tha" day, Pat, this poem would have been called "heavy, man, heavy." Heck, it is still heavy in my opinion.
Lies / Truth / Shame / Children
Those four words all together is enough to make a grown man cry. |
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