But a Dream
by Dawn Richerson
Monday, August 01, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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as it was in this life
in a moment that passed between us in a dream
you said nothing and told me everything
as you healed me with the love that grew
wrapping me like climbing vines and
all the safety I have not known
from another in my life
upon this planet
poured into me
filled with longing
and a thirst for belonging
to you that leaves my eyes heavy,
closing to take me further on the journey
where you will sit by my side and be home
where you have always wanted to be but have
not yet remembered, having slept through this life
as if it was a dream.
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|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Love this one too and agree with Jude about the ending.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Profound inspirational beauty that reaches deep....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well written, Dawn ... the ending is perfect to the mood of the poem ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|These are very moving and meaningful verses, Dawn; most expressive. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,