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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
2/19/2009 |
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Stain on a carpet, a heady memory....
YOU can write about anything and beautifully you did!
Another wind-swept writing creation!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Inspiration and Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/16/2009 |
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Thought provoking
Excellent write
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/25/2009 |
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OUtstanding !!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/18/2009 |
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| i like this--makes one ponder a bit! |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
1/18/2009 |
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This is excellent,I like reading this poem very much,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/18/2009 |
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Reality can be a wake up call can't it. You started this poem soft and dreamy and then bang you hit us with reality, as the poet intended, I am sure. Great delivery!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/18/2009 |
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beyond the horizon I want to see
So do I! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/18/2009 |
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One reads this poem with a shadow of a contentment smile,then...oops! that is a stain on your carpet! ! !
Welcome back!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
1/17/2009 |
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| our legacy's are often not well understood -- for our perceptions do not always match those of our successors -- interesting white Becca -- may peace and love be your avenue to joy -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/17/2009 |
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Makes me thik of the song "some where over the rainbow"...way up high...dreaming..and then reality. Great poem Becca!
Love and Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/17/2009 |
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Becca haven't seen much of your poetry lately but this one is sure a triumphant return to the den. It definately makes one think and ponder the inevitabilities of life and living. Very nicely done old friend.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/17/2009 |
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I'm reminded of the quote, Those that forget history are condemned to repeat it, when I read these lines - powerfully thought provoking and moving, Rebecca! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
1/17/2009 |
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I have some wonderful tips on stain removal. They are at www.wallysstainremovaltips.com/
Really liked this one.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
1/17/2009 |
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Thought provoking..
We will leave much behind
love
ron |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/17/2009 |
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Amazing when we stop to think of it. Superb metaphor Becca,
stains do last,unfortunately...Excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/17/2009 |
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| What we leave behind may be hard to clean up. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
1/17/2009 |
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| History is finite, but that stains takes an eternity. Enjoyed |
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