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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/4/2009 |
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a powerfully beautiful write Becca
Loved every line
Love 7 peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/26/2009 |
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| "being easy isn't pretty"! -- saw that on a bumper sticker of an automobile driven by an attractive young woman once -- for some reason, I instantly recalled it when I read your poem Becca -- I sense the remorse of a woman of the night -- seeking atonement and the opportunity for her chance at true love -- your verbiage has captured this with great compassion -- much love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/25/2009 |
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Becca, the passion expressed here is palpable and
the lament goes deep! Superb!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/24/2009 |
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Excellent and deep poem,very expressive and powerful.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/23/2009 |
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| Quite powerful. And LOL at Salty Walt! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/23/2009 |
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"...toe curling ecstasy..." never had one of those, but yes, once went half deaf by an orgasmic blood curling scream...now, don't remember who of us did that...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/22/2009 |
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There is much depth to these verses in this poem that deserves much more than a single reading. Thank you, Becca. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
2/22/2009 |
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| Becca,,,Such emotions expressed in this heartfelt write...excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
2/22/2009 |
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Boy oh boy, is this one good!! When I worked in the hospital for all those years, it sometimes like the nurses were just passing me around. There were times when I felt so cheap and used.
NOT
~W~ |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/22/2009 |
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Stunning passion in these yearning lines - wow. Rebecca, I concur, one of your best! My new favorite of yours. DEFINATELY a keeper.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
2/22/2009 |
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Becca, quite intensely written. Your opening verses smacked me right in the face! "Unfulfilled life and love experienced beneath stained sheets",
Wow what a way to begin this amazing poem.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/22/2009 |
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| there is a lot of depth in these few lines-love it! |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
2/22/2009 |
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Very nice lesson, My favorite line
"Seductive unknowns are studied and learned til’ orgasms screamed"
Thank you for sharing! Be Well, Carin |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/22/2009 |
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| Can't say it any better than what Felix has said. Amen. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/22/2009 |
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One of your best Becca...it touches the cravings and longings of the lonely as fulfillment screams not only to be sated but just to have the human contact of being wanted.
hugs
Fee |
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