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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
11/13/2006 |
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CJ - A monumental work, indeed. A computer is the cocktail bar without the cost and prescence. Yes, for those who have become disenchanted with their mate, it will happen. Howsomeever, the same gadget brought the two of us into a llimited friendship, which I enjoy immensely. Too, each of us have other cyber-pals, from whom wee get fresh poetry and learn about things in the livesrsons of persons we've never known, otherwise. I suppose it's like the REAL world; the toys are there... if one wants to play the game... and so many do, as your wise words and charges state. This is good work, my smart friend. By the way, this Friday, let's meet at the corner of AuthorsDen and Writer's Forum, shall we? Ole Tongue-in-Cheek, - Bill
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| Reviewed by J M |
11/11/2006 |
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| Powerful ending and so true all of this poem........ Thank you!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Zahala San Simone |
11/10/2006 |
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Whew! Lord Almighty!! You said it--gracefully--but you said it! Infidelity stinks--badly, and its stench is even fouler when it's done within the confines of the marital home. Whether it's clandestine phone calls, or IMs, or emails doesn't much matter. What does matter is the disrespect done to the unaware spouse--for which there is no excuse.
Cowards steal bytes--winners use them to look for productive solutions.
Very nice work,
Wendi |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
11/10/2006 |
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Bring it on! The more the merrier! It's their choices to read, write or get up or share, I know it works! This hits home for many! The key is - Boundries- Limits, children need em' -WE do too, us Grown ups who can't get enough!!!
GREAT style of writing it C-J! I love how you speak up! YOur poems/writings are similiar to my style. If you have time, try a few of mine and you will see! I am tracking you C-J, you caught me hook line and sinker after your 1st. Light! and PEACE! WArm HuGs, Sheee |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
11/9/2006 |
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I've seen this in many lives today. The net makes enemies just as well as it brings others' closer. Well said.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/9/2006 |
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Thank you for sharing your wise insightful sentiments on this theme, C-J. Well done! Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/9/2006 |
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| How dreadful..you can mail me at andyhotygossip.chatterbox.talk4ever |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
11/9/2006 |
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Not only from the white screen, but from the mouth as well...little bytes often undermine relationships. Excellent message, CJ!
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
11/9/2006 |
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CJ,
What multi-dimensional IMPACT this dynamic write can have on every soul who reads it!
Virtual relationships are at their height...there are too many lonely
spouses....male and female. Too many lonely people, period.
I agree with Victor..the real enemy rules the airwaves.
Love&Hugs, Rhonda |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
11/9/2006 |
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Cj...this is a Keeper for all to see! What a creative mind you have!
Night and day...the bytes occur, and just last night a marriage of 21 years ended for one of my dear sisters, she had no clue?
The bytes stole her life right out from under her, and he left.
This is a situation, where you can't byte back!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
11/9/2006 |
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| The power of darkness has attacked the family so well that today marriages are breaking up so easily, no time for children who suffer most and grow up without any moral values. Your imagery is great in this excellent poem. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/9/2006 |
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Most insightful offering and so very true!!
Words of wisdom spoken sister!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
11/9/2006 |
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Oh CJ, only your extraordinary insight is superior to your writing ability. The 'screen' can't begin to understand how much love, patience and understanding is required to fullfll a relationship. It only knows what it is told. Your wisdom shines through as always.
loveya
Rusty |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
11/9/2006 |
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CJ
As in every form of communication in life, it is honesty that counts..
Love and Hugs
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Brett Moore |
11/9/2006 |
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Great description of how technology is affecting relationships, CJ. Well done.
Brett |
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