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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
11/12/2006 |
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Wow! What a beautiful write CJ! A treasured pen that I will take with me to my dad today...I love this...
You have done what you set out to do! and so did they...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy |
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| Reviewed by H. Lena Jones |
11/11/2006 |
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Dearest CJ, A beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your beloved. I feel your sadness. Know that my thoughts and prayers are with you. "We will remember them..."
God Bless
Lots of love
Lena |
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| Reviewed by J M |
11/11/2006 |
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CJ,
A beautifultribute to those that serve and your soldier....Thank you this has been a blessing.
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
11/11/2006 |
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Whewwwwwww! Couldn't help but breathe deeply and hold my breath after the second stanza. So touching, and an image all too often repeated over the years. Many thanks and blessing to all those gone and those left behind. We cannot forget.
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/11/2006 |
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Beautiful tribute!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/11/2006 |
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A most appropriate and worthy offering for this day, C-J. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/11/2006 |
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I agree with Victor CJ! This is such a glorious poem for such a sad occasion, which makes it all the more powerful, You have outdone yourself with this one! May we always remember to honor them!Kudo's!
Love.
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
11/11/2006 |
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| Beautiful poem, that brings out all the pathos of those lost in battle. That we should never forget them. That we should never forget the survivors. Victor |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
11/11/2006 |
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CJ... this is So Beautifully said! I still have mine 1/2 finished and I ran into a rut, with the wording. This is not easy to see and know what all these wonderful soldiers put themselves through for US!
Your pen speaks Volumes of a lonely Sad heart! And the many who had to Sacrifice!
I'm glad you got all this out today!
PEACE! Love! HOPE! FAith and WArm HuGs, Sheeeoxxo |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
11/11/2006 |
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How beautiful, yet haunting this poem is. It is a wonderful loving tribute to those whom have given their lives for our freedom. You've penned this one straight from the heart!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
11/11/2006 |
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CJ,
A hauntingly reverent offering, for the most solemn of occasions.
As always, you contribute grace..
Love, Rhonda |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
11/11/2006 |
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| A heart wrenching tribute CJ. What angers me to no end is that the blood is being spilled in the WRONG COUNTRY. Osama (who was the real bad guy, when last I checked) resides elsewhere. Incredibly sad, and an incredible waste of human life. Yet it's a sacrifice that all are prepared to make...they are the bravest of souls. The last stanza, "legions of silent voices unite to call a comrade home" is amazing stuff. It gave me chills. Blessings, Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Malcolm Watts |
11/11/2006 |
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Nicely done CJ. On Rembrance Day, and everyday, we remember those from the past, the young men now in harms way on our behalf, and the young families who grieve. Malcolm Watts
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
11/11/2006 |
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In my opinion, it is the people like CJ, who share this moment, are heroes. Hugs for your bravery young lady.
loveya
Rusty |
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