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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
11/9/2009 |
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| Excellent - well written, Jean |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/1/2009 |
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Giggle...nature is beautiful
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Joanna Leone |
8/26/2008 |
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| You make me feel like I want to go and have a glass of iced tea with you! This is a beautiful poem. Autumn is my favorite time of year. Poetry means different things to different people. To me, this poem shows how much you appreciate nature, and the beautiful signs that fall is coming. Even though you have to take out your rake and start to work in your yard, the important thing is that you took time out to enjoy the sights of a fall, and reflect on the beauty of the day. This is a beautiful poem! Please visit my den when you have a chance. I would love to know what you think of my poems and short stories. |
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| Reviewed by Samuel Stone |
11/8/2007 |
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Cute piece, enjoyed the read... wishing you well..
Sam |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
10/15/2007 |
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| I love fall! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/27/2007 |
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Thank you for sharing this ode to my favorite season, Jean. Welcome to AD. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/26/2007 |
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Cute, nicely stated. Yes, tis the season when the rakes and brooms take over from once the lawnmore crawled. Nice write...
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
9/26/2007 |
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You are getting better with each new post Jean...Don't stop (except for a glass of tea)
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/26/2007 |
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That's when a leaf vac/blower comes in handy...love this smiling piece and if you have any of that iced tea left I'll joined you after the raking is done.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/26/2007 |
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| Now you've got me in the mood for raking Jean... can just smell those Autumn leaves from here in my study. Great poem, blessings, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/26/2007 |
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Jean,
When you're done your yard how about doing mine. (lol) I'll supply the ice tea, trash bags and even the rake. Happy raking. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/26/2007 |
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Jean Reeves, Jim Reeves sung "I love you because..." and I do because you write the sweetest thing to make my soul soft and good.
The season thanks you too.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/25/2007 |
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I love fall.....always have, always will. Glad summer is over (though you wouldn't know it from the temps; oh, well; 'twon't be long before it cools off!)! Very well done, Jean; delightful poem! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/25/2007 |
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Drag out the rake you must, but then enjoy the leaf angels as you dive into the piles to make them. There is still fun to be had.
Your poem like autumn is ever so beautiful.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by larry linville |
9/25/2007 |
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Back at you. God put the leaves there -- I don't believe in interferring with God's plan. Up here the snow will cover it up soon enough so I leave my rake in the garage.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/25/2007 |
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LOL, Jean,
Know how you feel about fall: a love-hate relationship. Pretty to look up, a booger bear to clean up. LOL Living in Ohio, we had a woods behind our house. I did a LOT of raking!! A delightful poem, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. (And Happy Fall to Y'ALL!) |
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