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distortions
by Debby J Rosenberg
Tuesday, April 28, 2009
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distortions within thought forms

people manipulated by means beyond their control

would they have chosen their lifestyles and sorrows

if they could remember true home?

 

home.. towards the creator the source of all life

where immortal and love service are a part of all lives

 

instead infused within each body cell

are the codes of deception, separation, and pain

taught to believe in self shame and to blame

pointing fingers at others and critique of the self

 

manipulated by belief structures which relinquish self power

as governments, corporations, and religious association

never questioning the system nor its tremendous control

 

each being exists as part of the all, when one falls weeping

the entire whole is involved

each has decided though it was very long ago

to play part in this drama and remember to go home

 

the divine plan and design as originally intended

was a perfect creation and  intricately fabricated

freedom of choices to experience it all

in effort to grow and to heal what was needed

 

the times are upon us to sort through the beings

who will be left and who will be leaving

the drama of earth, the players and dreams

 

heavenly celestials wait ready with patience

but far too few request, show love, or ask guidance

because it all can be healed, realigned and united

 

you are free to choose, that is god’s law

the portals are open but not for too long

if you miss the window, its like missing the train

you’ll have to stay here and play the drama again

maybe next time you'll remember

when the window opens again

I understand it comes every 26,000 years

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. 5/20/2009
Visually soothing and the gentle urge to read between the lines......Beautiful work Debby.

Peace,

Bill
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 5/2/2009
A very well written poem,Excellent work,take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/1/2009
i like the way you marry the conceptual with the commonplace, Debby; the spiritual with the material. This truly makes us think, interweaving the familiar with the unseen. You really hit home with the concreteness of your reckoning: the figure of 26,000 being so weighty in the context of a never-ending cycle. I get a sense of the import of karma from this write. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/30/2009
you are free to choose, that is god’s law
the portals are open but not for too long
if you miss the window, its like missing the train
you’ll have to stay here and play the drama again

Makes sense to me, Debby. Your verses and the accompanying graphic complement one another very effectively. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/29/2009
Fantastic poem though I'm not sure of the return every 26,00 years, I do agree with the rest!

"distortions within thought forms

people manipulated by means beyond their control

would they have chosen their lifestyles and sorrows

if they could remember true home?

home.. towards the creator the source of all life
where immortal and love service are a part of all lives"


Excellent work Debby!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/29/2009
How very true, for until we break free of surrounding man made laws, do we see the true light, true calling, absolutely beautiful...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by jude forese 4/29/2009
it isn't often a race of spiritual beings can totally crossover into the next stage of supernal evolution ... yes, the portal is opening, our opportunity arriving ...
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/29/2009
i love this write--profound and thought provoking
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/29/2009
We are revolving around a sun, our sun are revolving around our galaxy,our galaxy are revolving around what? God's hand is there somewhere and we will be back in 26.000 years to the very place and the very second where we can go from here to there.
Where is there?
Pure genius, Debby.

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/29/2009
Intense and such a well matched graphic.

Fee
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain 4/28/2009
Very strongly worded one shakes at first reading, you put the words exactly where they should fall, and I wish those who handle the global crisis get to read this -"far too few request, show love, or ask guidance."

Cynthia


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