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the silence
by Debby J Rosenberg
Wednesday, July 11, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.

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who am I, if not this flesh, or it's desires
which come so effortless?

who watches the existance, made manifest?

It is not I, says the mind, whose
memories run mad from the pieces gone past
to the flirting projections of fantastic quests.

the silent indifference patiently waits
just knowing without thought, its love radiates.

come what may without preference
to be what is, is what I am

each experience revolves
a perception
camouflaged as reality

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	7/30/2012

Another thought-inciting offering, Debby. Your words awaken my thought process. Love and best wishes, Regis




Reviewed by Andy Turner	7/15/2012

Indeed, it is an illusion. Spec' to those who sleep walk through their programmed life. Never seeing or feeling life.




Reviewed by Vivian Dawson	7/13/2012

Wise introspection Debby as "the silence" is golden Lady Vivian




Reviewed by Ronald Hull	7/13/2012

I love the flesh and its desires to come effortlessly. ;-) Ron




Reviewed by Diana Legun	7/12/2012

There is much 'age of awareness' in this poem. Perhaps the world of man can turn around, if more and more will understand these words of yours. Exquisitely written. ~~ DIana




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/12/2012

Intricate lines of thoughts and emotions you have weaved into this one...nicely done. fee




Reviewed by Kate Burnside	7/12/2012

Herein you exude the wisdom and stillness and innate understanding and knowledge of a stone, Debby. A stone just is and what it knows and understands who can tell? How transient are our "realities2 by comparison. I really like this, thank you. xx




Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER	7/12/2012

I love the last line Debby, too many, or most of us, have to watch out as what we perceive reality to be, including me, and poetry. Blessings!




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	7/12/2012

nice one! m

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