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Where Did I Go? by Timothy James Foley Saturday, April 12, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
What have I done? My body is lost. Where is my mind? I feel covered in frost. The words mean nothing. I'm fading away. My body has failed. I fell down today. My mind feels so numb. My hands are the same. Can't give this feeling face. Can't find it a name. Where did I go? Where is my heart? What did I do? Was I gone from the start? This feeling too powerful. Too strong to resist. I feel so damned lost. Think I barely exist. The cigs and the drugs. Do nothing for me. I forgot how to feel. Forgetting to see. I feel so empty. Hollow. Dead. I feel so damned empty. Inside my own head...

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Reviewed by Felicia	4/26/2003

I love this one also. This is exactly how I felt yesterday. My life didnt matter anymore. I was throwing my future away. I wanted to leave my house and not come back. But I realized it wasent worth it. I still dont know what went through my head though.




Reviewed by Drkman	4/15/2003

Tim Sad that we all must live through this feeling, however I believe we do. The crutches like drugs we use to help us along are really a part of the problem. Great write Drkman




Reviewed by Meghan Lacey	4/13/2003

This is one of your greater poems, so dark and tragic.




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	4/12/2003

Excellent and dark, I rather liked this one, Reindeer




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	4/12/2003

Drugs will do that....well done.