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Working On It by Timothy James Foley Thursday, April 17, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
Looking down. Backing out. Close my eyes...feel the sound. Take me out and leve me to my business. Take me out and let me on my own. Turn around. Dust it off. Roll on down. Make me stop. This is like a superautomatic system. Followed the game too many times. Broken down and lost it. But here I am again. I find myself so lost. Then open the door to my own room. Laying in bed. Knowing not quite who, I am...

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Reviewed by Jen Bennett	4/21/2003

its so familiar..very good




Reviewed by jude forese	4/17/2003

our creative essence is fluid, knowing who we are can become somewhat stagnant... good write...




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	4/17/2003

4-17-03 The Whole Idea Is To Learn From What You've (Experienced)Learned, Not Who I Am But Who Will I Become! TRASK




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	4/17/2003

You need to get 'with the program' Tim. hahaha...nicely done on this one too.